Every night you go to a sound sleep, the night is so peaceful you never can even dream how everything can go to hell...

After i woke up

This is a system/game novel. And as the author told me, it isn't as horrifying as the cover so far.

On the other hand, no idea what happened to the other x million humans overnight, assuming they aren't the monsters he's begun killing off. 

Basic structure is pretty good, grammar, spelling, and so on. Capitalization kind of comes and goes, but it doesn't interfer with the understanding. 

There's obviously much more to be explained about the world/dream/game than the first five chapters held.

Absolutely loved it! There's a big difference between your work and others and it's that your story seems like something we've all been waiting for to happen to us for years! Can't wait to read the rest! Keep it going!

 I didn't like the story and was unable to understand the meaning of story  How can you put it in Horror and Thriller category. Stupid story 