Girl with the Golden Eyes

Other than the very rare grammar mistake this story has the solemn feeling that many fantasy novels try but fail to give off. The cliffhangers are in good places and even the first few chapters gave the feeling of awe and companionship that novels generally need to build up before liking a companion. All I can say is I cant wait for the the next update.

Shameless self-view here. I like dragons and I like magic. I also like magic girl killing dragons ................................................................................................ I mean the story focuses on a girl who died in a game designed for her and it ended up becoming real. It's legit, read it please? ; _ ;

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Good story, good author, good characters, very good cliff's, had to lower a bit on chapter stability - chapter reletevly are uploaded as how is told beforehand in the authors discord and about once a week ish, but can sometimes be a bit slow from one chapter to anather considering the cliff and all. Overall it is a must read!

Vereh vereh ***eh. I recommend it to all. 😋😊😋😉😋😉😋😁😋😁😎😎😙😙😶😶😚😎😁😎😊😶☺😶😚🤗😊😍😊🤗😊😶😚😶😊🙂😊😎😊🤗😚😎😚😎😚😎🙂😉😶😉😶😚😶😚😶😊🙂😊🙂😊🙂😊🙂😊🙂😊🙂🙂😊😶😚😶😚😶😚

I say I absolutely love this book it got every thing that i wanted all in one book.

This is an overall really great book and even though I'm only on Chapter 2 I can tell the amount of work used on this. This story is very underrated and should have some more views and collections. I can never tell where the story is going every time I try to guess which shows a really nice plot.

The story is okay and the characters seem hastily written but the author seems to be leaning towards world building. I dont think it's a bad idea but it still leaves some to be desired but with so many characters, I dont see it as too much of a grievance from an ******* writer

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Great start can’t wait to see more! Story is very well written No many chapters so I can’t say much for its stability I just hope there’s more As it stand the story is still in its early stages but has a lot of potential The characters seem very dynamic with plenty of potential for growth lastly ashes world has many currently in explained mystery’s that I can’t wait to learn the secrets behind

I like how parents are strongly cautioned for a novel that takes place in a world creating for the protagonist by her parents lol. Anyway it's a really good novel unless you are a parent. If you are a parent you might get paranoid O_O

Well here I am again. And all the grammar mistakes that I saw are gone. great job on this so far Ashes. I'm very happy wot the story so far am it deserves nothing less than 5 stars

It's a really interesting fantasy novel! While it's a revision and I haven't read the previous work, I love it already! Added right away to my library to read more! Nearly no grammar errors (at least none that I could notice right away) and a good start! Keep it up, author! >3</