Well what to say..... Its a good story only real complaint is the constant mix up of her him he and she. Most of the time when talking about a female character it will be like. He was bashfuly looking at the ground. And the he should have been a She. You will see this thru out the chapters. My advice to the author is to get someone to prof read or edit the chapter. Cuz honestly those are dumb mistakes
6 years ago
3
LordDustin
Salute this man Salute this man Salute this man
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Amazing story
6 years ago
1
Requiem_Soul
Whoever read this stop if you dont want a forceful mc. I mean he forcefully kiss a girl and make bet with some stupid sect master. And the worst thing is xia qinyue fucking got raped? Fuck this ****
6 years ago
1
Marsyon
THIS PERSON DOES NOT NO THE ENGLISH LANGUAGE. THEY KEEP MIXING UP HE AND SHE. This is pissing me off. I still want to read it, but I can feel my brain cells dying
6 years ago
0
maax
It's a good story.
but please read your chapter before posting
so you edit the small mistakes.
Thank you for this amazing fanfic.
hope you will continue till the end.
6 years ago
0
GGMissFortune
Use atg wiki pls... What is with all the deep profound kingdoms? Unreadable BTW! Use atg wiki pls... What is with all the deep profound kingdoms? Unreadable BTW! Use atg wiki pls... What is with all the deep profound kingdoms? Unreadable BTW!
6 years ago
0
VoidZeroo
Good idea but too difficult to read.Get an editor author.
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6 years ago
0
BigNovelBigDream
This book is amazing, keep going! Can't stop reading. Can't wait to see more. Do you have any social media that I can follow so I can know when you gonna update?
4 years ago
0
CrimsonDarkLord
The author can't even give his MC an identity so stole a popular one. I feel like reading a gay novel, he can't even use proper pronoun. 'What's wrong with you!' It's not that hard (Use She or her if it's a girl) and (Use he or his for boys).
6 years ago
0
cRazyReaderNovels
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6 years ago
0
Hocolate
Saya memberikan bintang 1 karena untuk bersenang senang 😀😂🤣😀😂🤣😂🤣😂🤣😂🤣😂🤣😂🤣😂🤣😂🤣🤣😂😂🤣😂🤣🤣😂🤣😂🤣🤣😂🤣😂🤣😂🤣😂🤣😂🤣😂🤣🤣😂🤣😂🤣😂🤣🤣😂🤣😂🤣😂🤣🤣😂🤣😂🤣😂🤣😂🤣😂🤣😂🤣
6 years ago
0
darkstar100
So good So good So good So good So good So good I really like the story but he can be more op like super op but it's So good ........,.................................. ............................,....................I aslo have a story click my name and tell me what you think I will be gone for a while tho
6 years ago
0
JakeWJElliott
I'm loving the story so far. I find it amusing and the fact that he has an infinite system is just funny :P. Can you make it so he can go to other novels ? Staying in one with an infinite system seems like it would get a bit boring. Good work though, keep uploading.
6 years ago
0
Brenden_Propes
To many writing mistakes which makes it way to confusing to read.
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Well what to say..... Its a good story only real complaint is the constant mix up of her him he and she. Most of the time when talking about a female character it will be like. He was bashfuly looking at the ground. And the he should have been a She. You will see this thru out the chapters. My advice to the author is to get someone to prof read or edit the chapter. Cuz honestly those are dumb mistakes
Salute this man Salute this man Salute this man Salute this man Salute this man Salute this man Salute this man Salute this man Salute this man Amazing story
Whoever read this stop if you dont want a forceful mc. I mean he forcefully kiss a girl and make bet with some stupid sect master. And the worst thing is xia qinyue fucking got raped? Fuck this ****
THIS PERSON DOES NOT NO THE ENGLISH LANGUAGE. THEY KEEP MIXING UP HE AND SHE. This is pissing me off. I still want to read it, but I can feel my brain cells dying
It's a good story. but please read your chapter before posting so you edit the small mistakes. Thank you for this amazing fanfic. hope you will continue till the end.
Use atg wiki pls... What is with all the deep profound kingdoms? Unreadable BTW! Use atg wiki pls... What is with all the deep profound kingdoms? Unreadable BTW! Use atg wiki pls... What is with all the deep profound kingdoms? Unreadable BTW!
Good idea but too difficult to read.Get an editor author. ,........,.....,...,...,..,.,.,...,....,..,.......,..........,...............,........,.....,...,...,.., .,
This book is amazing, keep going! Can't stop reading. Can't wait to see more. Do you have any social media that I can follow so I can know when you gonna update?
The author can't even give his MC an identity so stole a popular one. I feel like reading a gay novel, he can't even use proper pronoun. 'What's wrong with you!' It's not that hard (Use She or her if it's a girl) and (Use he or his for boys).
Reveal Spoiler
Saya memberikan bintang 1 karena untuk bersenang senang 😀😂🤣😀😂🤣😂🤣😂🤣😂🤣😂🤣😂🤣😂🤣😂🤣🤣😂😂🤣😂🤣🤣😂🤣😂🤣🤣😂🤣😂🤣😂🤣😂🤣😂🤣😂🤣🤣😂🤣😂🤣😂🤣🤣😂🤣😂🤣😂🤣🤣😂🤣😂🤣😂🤣😂🤣😂🤣😂🤣
So good So good So good So good So good So good I really like the story but he can be more op like super op but it's So good ........,.................................. ............................,....................I aslo have a story click my name and tell me what you think I will be gone for a while tho
I'm loving the story so far. I find it amusing and the fact that he has an infinite system is just funny :P. Can you make it so he can go to other novels ? Staying in one with an infinite system seems like it would get a bit boring. Good work though, keep uploading.
To many writing mistakes which makes it way to confusing to read. 🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬