This is what happens when you mix guns, games, and the reaper in one story.

The Reaper's Student

I'm the writer so I had to boost it a little okay? I haven't gotten used to writing that much so please endure through maybe a couple updates until I do. Please do criticize so i can improve. Just not too much btw.

Hi, It's Al. You requested me to try your story a couple weeks ago. I've only recently read your story. Your doing pretty okay for now, okay as in needs more improving but satisfies me a little. Kinda curious when were gonna see some action though. For now, you need to improve your writing skills. Maybe add a little bit more detail to the story so we could see it more clearer, and maybe more updates would help.