Vampire Romance

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I really enjoyed how the book started explaining who she was and why she was this way I also liked how it jumped into her life and how she became the strong independent person that she was or that she will become in the book I really like how its explanatory it explains everything in detail and I really love the wording that was used

Really good start!! It brings you in and does not disappoint. Hope it keeps going, love to see where it goes in the future. It has the start of somthing amazing.

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This only about someone getting raped over and over again. This storyline needs more structure and a better plot in general. Also if you're going to write about someone getting raped you should give the reader's a heads up, because for those of us that have gone through it, gives us flash backs if not warned... I'm sorry if I come off as harsh but as a writer myself, I would want to be told if my story didn't make any sense and if it cause unnecessary anxiety/stress/pain for anyone..

Isnt written well. Was supposed to be about vampires and was just a poorly written sex novel. Needs to be rewritten or taken down. Very misleading

Not worth the resd sorry. You just jumped into a small scene and ended it with much confussion. Didnt know what was even happening. Writting skills lacked heavily

Horrible horrible writing! My ten year old can right better than this and the beginning was so promising! It’s really sad you stooped so Quickly into the nasty **** and with really crappy writing!

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I think the author wanted to write for a P*** company but got confused. Needs way more language and writing skills. Maybe try a different genre while you’re at it...

As a victim of rape you should warn your readers that someone gets raped twice within the first two pages. It's completely inappropriate and poorly written. Im unibstalling the app

I like the idea of the story. If this was just to get it out it’s a great start. But it defiantly needs to be proof read and edited. I hope you continue the story.

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