Evolutionary Prison

Fast paced yet intricate. It's well thought out, and the character development is one of, if not the best I've seen in a very long time. From the moment I started reading this, I've been invested in the characters and their experiences. I read the all the chapters in one sitting, and honestly I wish there was more. The author is amazing and beyond talented. Saying Good job is an understatement. Keep it up

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Very Interesting plot and world. The character developement could ve been a bit better imo and the ending leaves quite a bit to be desired. Hoping for a sequal

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One hell of a Novel. Love the Plot. Hope that there will be Lots of chapters in the future. Its the perfect evolve System scifi novel! Dont know a better one thanks tis one XD

This is a pretty cool take on the whole evolution thing, cool creatures, nice twists, so if you have time give it a quick read you won't regret it. **. Plz don't ever drop this

It was a breath of fresh air that had me engaged from the start to end. The characters' background was build up so well that it didn't show deliberation and synced in well with the story and that was my favorite part of this novel. And I wish the author good luck to keep making quality works in her future works as well. Thank you.

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Writing Quality: I thought it was fairly all right. Some of the descriptions I thought it could have been better. 4/5 Stability of Updates: The author pays a lot of attention to all comments and will reply at times. 5/5 Story Development: The story starts off interesting. Could have more descriptions. There are appox. 5 filler chapters about ch. 45 that didn’t add much value to the story line. The story does end strongly though. 4/5 Character Design: The two main characters are intriguing, I would have personly liked to see some more Shonen expressions; for instance, the character unleashes its rage or all of its power. More character interactions would have been good, other than the two main characters. 4/5 World background: I thought everything was explained adequately. There was a mention of a bike in the story. I mistaken it for the classical ET bicycle, but it turned out to be a Starwars Speedster. 5/5 Overall, I enjoyed reading this, and definitely will be reading the sequel. The fundamental imagination I consider to be excellent.