Alexander Potter[Hiatus]

To be frank, this doesn't deserve more then 1-2 stars. Ill start with the grammar. It is atrocious. I would put it at the standard that I would expect out of a yound child in primary school. There is also no attempts at proofreading or editing, the author very clearly hasn't read what he has written or put in the slightest amount of effort to run this through grammarly. Now that we have established that this is genuinely painful to read, let's talk about the story and characters or lack thereof. There is no prologue and we are given absolutely zero information about the main character, who he is/was, thoughts, goals, personality.. nothing. It jumps right in with an old lady yelling and imprisoning an apparent god then, for reasons beyond my comprehension as to how or even why, sends the MC to the Harry Potter world. But that's not all, to further reduce any actual character growth or story development the MC now gets to have 5 *wishes* because you know, really needs even more plotarmour. But wait, that is still not apparently enough as he also gets even more gifts that he will 'discover' when he is there. Next we get typical super genius baby with the power of wishes, born as a twin brother for Harry because being original is just too damn hard these days!. There is also no need to worry about his new parents as he straight up let's them die in front of him (without even attempting to try), and in typical psychopathic fashion feels zero emotion. I would talk about the characters next, but there isn't any. The only thing I know about the MC is that he has no emotions. That's it. The other characters and their thoughts/emotions are not given any thought. We also know nothing about the original characters asides from assumptions we can make from th ge original Harry Potter. Would not reccomend reading.

Great story . Make him trian his body with magic to make it stronger and master wandless magic ///////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////

Over all its a pretty good novel, with some mistakes in it.I just write this REVIEW FOR EXPPPPPP PPPPPPPPPP PPPPPPPPP AND I HOPE update SOOOOOOOOOOOOON😭😭

Interesting concept. Plot is not too bad. Terrible grammar. Hard to read at times. Needs a lot of editing. Verdict: learn how English works first.

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This is so far the best harry potter fiction I have read on this site and I can't wait for this to come back. I've certainly added this to my library as its rare for a fanfic to make me unable to stop reading it.

This story had potential, but it has to many grammar issues, and progresses to slowly for my liking. There also has been no updates in 8 months so I assume it is abandoned.

I like this novel and hoping you to continue writing! You even finish the first book but that's ok. But I really hope you to continue writing!

To be honest this doesn't deserve 3 stars. The Grammer is so horrible that it makes me want to dig a hole and die in it. I haven't even seen you try to go back and fix your mistakes either.

No[oooooooooo please come back this story is so good.❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤😘❤❤😘😘❤🐔😛❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤😘😘😛😛😛😛😛😛😛😛😛😛😛❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤😘❤💚😛😛💚😛💚❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤💚💚

A great fanfic of harry potter, that explores what we wanted the most in harry potter, mastery of magic and stuff. If not for the stability of Updates, pretty sure my rating would be close to 4.5

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Love this novel really love it story is just to great but there is one problen no not about the story ore the characters but the release update there nust needs to be more chapters so please lets al schow some respect en all put one power stone to up it in the rankings

There grammar'sso baad it giving canceur. There stoop ruuding nivel nauw i wuarn yau. And with that my short summary of the authors english skills while adopting his/ her writing style is finished.