Tokugawa Shinichi- The Beginning of All Lucks and End of all Lives- was too Powerful due to transmigrating worlds to worlds, earning a countless amount of [Status Points], causing his body, soul. spirit, and magic to be FAR too powerful.
Tian Yuanle, the Chinese Immortal Practitioner from the Third World that Shinichi went to.
What's their relationship? One wanted to have the other's body, heart, and soul while the other wanted to run away from the man while trying to live a comfortable life and doing business on the side.
Genres: Original, Mature, Gores and Blood, Killing, BL/Yaoi, Interdimensional Traveling, OP-MC, Game-Elements, Triggered-Action- Torture, and Sadism
Warning: A lot of grammars and errors. Please do be nice. If you found any errors or grammars, please let me know.
PS: I also posted this novel on either Royalroad and/or Novelupdates forum by [Lunnear]
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The background info is too much. Most of it gets straight pass by my head. I would suggest to add background info only when needed. Do not preset it. For example, when MC comes across a beast then please do describe it. Don't give all classification of different beasts beforehand. Please...
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The story is quite heavy handed with descriptive information. I do like the storyline and characters, but I sometimes get lost in certain break down info. Not much in the way of smut it's a good and a bad thing.
This is a first-person storytelling which is interesting because most of the main character's thoughts are not hidden. I just feel like the main character will get many obstacles to achieve a 'carefree life'. My condolences. *Warning. Prepare for the test of your IQ to consume all of the info! *
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This was worth reading. The ML are litlle bit OP. And it is BL. Well I did read only the 19 chapters that are there. There is nothing graphic in them. There is a lot of world background descriptions. That was anoying.
I only read 10 chapters. Main character is overpowered - I usually did not like. But apealing is his direct and frank personality. He is no world savior, but protects his people. I like this guy. I did not yet encounter the other ML. This is a BL. So be warned beforehand. If you dont like, dont read.
I really enjoyed reading the book and i how that others would too so u hope you will read this book! The main character hates being OP and the way the author expresses his turmoil is wonderful!!
Well i dont know if i like the character its so op for me.. like theres no challenge... and the plot is so so... wish theres challenge ahead like i want to feel the mc desperate...
Love the OPness!! Wish to have more chapters to read. Anyways, there is a lot of information dumps so for readers who don’t like these types of novels, this ain’t for you.