A dream journey of boy, who reached to pokemon world mysteriously, It is journey of a kid in a world which is familiar to him but he don't know about consequences. What he is gonna do ? What is waiting for him out there ? Read to see adventure.
The character design is quite bad, for example when did magikarp become a gyarados and when did he catch a litten. The story development also needs work, you need to slow down a little and show him bonding with his pokemon.
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The character design is quite bad, for example when did magikarp become a gyarados and when did he catch a litten. The story development also needs work, you need to slow down a little and show him bonding with his pokemon.
Hey there! Good day for writing! If you wanted to see whether you can get paid by distributing the current work or getting financial support by writing new work, you might want to contact geekyteddyyo@gmail.com. A brief introduction, some sample chapters or links will be appreciated when reaching out.