THE MAL GIRL

I like the story Please update more ............. More chapters please🥺🥺 Bad girl and Mr perfect ..... Interesting chemistry..... I would love to read whole story Author please update on regular basis

I love the story A new story different from regular story A beautiful chemistry Good luck 👍👍👍👍👍 😘😘😘😘😘😘😘 💓💓 💓💓 💓💓 💓💓 💓💓 💓💓 💓💓 💓💓 💓💓 💓💓 💓💓 💓💓 💓💓 💓💓 💓💓 💓💓 💓💓 💓💓 💓💓 💓💓 💓💓 💓💓 💓💓 💓💓 💓💓 💓💓 💓💓 💓💓 💓💓 💓💓 💓💓 💓💓 💓💓 💓💓 💓💓 💓💓 💓💓 💓💓 💓💓 💓💓 💓💓 💓💓 💓💓 💓

It still needs improvement with the writing. Maybe you could describe more detail about the character or the world background so the reader could feel how the story flow. I don't have a problem with MPOV Because my book is doing the same hahaha. So far the story it's interesting. You just need to keep improving the story while for editing grammar or misspell, you can do it later. If you can convey your story thoroughly the reader will still accept it and follow the story. Well, who am I kidding?

You have an interesting novel here. The writing itself is pretty good. I can clearly grasp the school life setting. It's a classic president x delinquent romance?? The storyline is on point, it just needs some proof-reading. If you can mind some of the capitalization and punctuation errors, I'm sure you'll be able to enjoy this school life romance. Writers are people too, so read with your own eyes before agreeing based on what someone wrote.

So far so good. You need to do some proofreading and fix some grammar mistakes but so far the story is developing nicely. Keep it up Author

It's an interesting topic for a romantic fiction novel. However, bad girls and perfect men are actually quite common troupes, especially with webnovels and manga. If you like those type of troupes, go ahead and read, it should fit you. It feels like a novel targeted toward teenagers and the younger generation. Since the author isn't a native English speaker, the grammar isn't perfect, but the story still gets its point across. Keep it up! >3</