Good story with cool main character so far it progresses nicely.the Yuri in the story just adds the perfect touch.hopefuly the author continues with the story.
6 years ago
3
Hizashi_sensei
It was intriguing but the lack of profreading and the horrible grammar made it unbearable . Its like every character is he and she at the same time.
disappointing .
5 years ago
2
LenDeRome
I'm really glad to read a unique novel like this one with cool plot, unique characters and especially the yuri it's definitely the work of perfection but the only problems are the pronouns and the update but I know that you will improve and please update more it's been like days since you update Good Luck Author!!
6 years ago
2
lstreader
I like the story a lot, but the only issue is that the translation sucks. It's absolutely terrible, sometimes I can't even understand what's going on.
4 years ago
1
LostPaladin
This is one of the better novels that I have read!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!’!!!,!!!!,!,!,!!,!,!,!,!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Please don’t drop it
5 years ago
1
lazy006
A good story that made me interested though the downside of it is how the author's uses his/her pronoun which needed improvement and a bit to his/her verb... if he can improve of these two then even of there is always wrong grammars the readers won't be confused of the flow of the story and could be understandable at least a bit and not skipping some paragraphs...
P.S. I don't mean to offend someone but I really do like the story... yet there are some things I could not understand because of the two I mentioned above.
Right, I do have some question though... is the MC a half breed or what? This confuses me because she says she came from a forgotten race and calls herself a vampire then dragon another time. What is the connection of these two? Because nomatter how I see it Vampire and Dragon are two different race and not one so... is LW a halfbreed that has a blood of a Vampire and a Dragon?
5 years ago
1
MuffinCake
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5 years ago
1
GGMissFortune
All characters in this story are hermaphrodites capable of switching sexes on a whim
Even the writer must be astounded
All characters in this story are hermaphrodites capable of switching sexes on a whim
Even the writer must be astounded
This novel has potential to be a very good one... but ruined by severely lack of proofread... And the author seems don't care about the pronouns... he/she, her/him, her/his, are all mixed up badly... That's why I rated 2-star on Writing Quality....
Please fix it..it's only on early chapters.. I hope it gets better
6 years ago
1
Ottor_T0ts
Poor grammar and frequent pronoun mismatch. Story is compelling but i can't continue with this grammar
FILLFILLFILLFILLFILL FILLF IFILLF ILF
5 years ago
0
crazy_reader9
Its goooood 👍👍👍👍👍🏼👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍🏽 keep writing new chapte i really like the book we are waiting. What is the voice inside her is it enemy or ally so exciting
5 years ago
0
crazy_reader9
The story is very good i like the way you express the story pleazzzzzzz don't leave it even if you are not going to update any new chapter please let the readers know
Reveal Spoiler
Good story with cool main character so far it progresses nicely.the Yuri in the story just adds the perfect touch.hopefuly the author continues with the story.
It was intriguing but the lack of profreading and the horrible grammar made it unbearable . Its like every character is he and she at the same time. disappointing .
I'm really glad to read a unique novel like this one with cool plot, unique characters and especially the yuri it's definitely the work of perfection but the only problems are the pronouns and the update but I know that you will improve and please update more it's been like days since you update Good Luck Author!!
I like the story a lot, but the only issue is that the translation sucks. It's absolutely terrible, sometimes I can't even understand what's going on.
This is one of the better novels that I have read!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!’!!!,!!!!,!,!,!!,!,!,!,!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Please don’t drop it
A good story that made me interested though the downside of it is how the author's uses his/her pronoun which needed improvement and a bit to his/her verb... if he can improve of these two then even of there is always wrong grammars the readers won't be confused of the flow of the story and could be understandable at least a bit and not skipping some paragraphs... P.S. I don't mean to offend someone but I really do like the story... yet there are some things I could not understand because of the two I mentioned above. Right, I do have some question though... is the MC a half breed or what? This confuses me because she says she came from a forgotten race and calls herself a vampire then dragon another time. What is the connection of these two? Because nomatter how I see it Vampire and Dragon are two different race and not one so... is LW a halfbreed that has a blood of a Vampire and a Dragon?
Reveal Spoiler
All characters in this story are hermaphrodites capable of switching sexes on a whim Even the writer must be astounded All characters in this story are hermaphrodites capable of switching sexes on a whim Even the writer must be astounded
Unreadable BTW Unreadable BTW Unreadable BTW Unreadable BTW Unreadable BTW Unreadable BTW Unreadable BTW Unreadable BTW Unreadable BTW
This novel has potential to be a very good one... but ruined by severely lack of proofread... And the author seems don't care about the pronouns... he/she, her/him, her/his, are all mixed up badly... That's why I rated 2-star on Writing Quality.... Please fix it..it's only on early chapters.. I hope it gets better
Poor grammar and frequent pronoun mismatch. Story is compelling but i can't continue with this grammar FILLFILLFILLFILLFILL FILLF IFILLF ILF
Its goooood 👍👍👍👍👍🏼👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍🏽 keep writing new chapte i really like the book we are waiting. What is the voice inside her is it enemy or ally so exciting
The story is very good i like the way you express the story pleazzzzzzz don't leave it even if you are not going to update any new chapter please let the readers know
Reveal Spoiler