When an junior intelligence/spec-op operative is transported to another world with his charge and crush, a sorceress, along with his entire class, peace would be the very last thing happening in the story.
[Self-review]
This story is also uploaded on a few other websites, including Wattpad, SpaceBattle, and SufficientVelocity. I'm posting it here for more exposure, as a chance to improve my writing. Please share your thoughts on my work, what should I do, how should I improve...
At the moment, 8 chapters are finished and the 9th chapter is being written. I'll upload done work on webnovel every day until the progress is caught up.
6 years ago
1
tothedome566
This story is absolutely amazing. Truthfully this is better written then half the paid books in my Kindle library. Orchids a complete and utter travesty that there are so few chapters.
If this were to be published as a series I would eagerly pay at least 10$ a book.
Short as it is it's a must read.
4 years ago
0
simutun
Hey there!
Good day for writing! If you want to see whether you can get paid by distributing the current work or getting financial support by writing new works, you might want to contact
rebecca.review@outlook.com. A brief introduction, some sample chapters, or links will be appreciated when reaching out.
4 years ago
0
NEAPOLITAN
K even though I haven't read this bit I have a question, ain't magic already in isekai??and if there's no magic then it's replaced with Chi/ki/Qi and if there's none of those then it's in an apocalypse where guns are present, and if it's a world that has none of those then it defeats the purpose of isekai entertainment
Reveal Spoiler
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[Self-review] This story is also uploaded on a few other websites, including Wattpad, SpaceBattle, and SufficientVelocity. I'm posting it here for more exposure, as a chance to improve my writing. Please share your thoughts on my work, what should I do, how should I improve... At the moment, 8 chapters are finished and the 9th chapter is being written. I'll upload done work on webnovel every day until the progress is caught up.
This story is absolutely amazing. Truthfully this is better written then half the paid books in my Kindle library. Orchids a complete and utter travesty that there are so few chapters. If this were to be published as a series I would eagerly pay at least 10$ a book. Short as it is it's a must read.
Hey there! Good day for writing! If you want to see whether you can get paid by distributing the current work or getting financial support by writing new works, you might want to contact rebecca.review@outlook.com. A brief introduction, some sample chapters, or links will be appreciated when reaching out.
K even though I haven't read this bit I have a question, ain't magic already in isekai??and if there's no magic then it's replaced with Chi/ki/Qi and if there's none of those then it's in an apocalypse where guns are present, and if it's a world that has none of those then it defeats the purpose of isekai entertainment