The Way of the Sword (BL)
Zemin Yan is an orphan who lived on the streets, until the day that the Celestial Sword Sect makes large-scale recruitment, in which even the beggars were analyzed in the Qin Empire.
He who lived in an isolated village had managed to pass through the most difficult examination of the sect, but even so, his talent was the only medium. At best, his prospect was to reach the intermediate-level Aurore Core realm.
Zemin Yan was happy with this prospect, after all, he was just a humble mumper, over time, he learns to read and write, he even grew a little taller, but his physique was delicate and flexible, not pretending that he was a martial practitioner, thus generating mockery for his colleagues even a strong bullying.
However, Zemin Yan didn't care and always proceeded with optimism, until the moment that was allocated to be assistant of the greater cultivator of the young generation of Celestial Sword Sect.
Zhong Liang is the supreme talent of the Heavenly Sword, he is tall, handsome and powerful, he is the dream of all women and the goal of all the boys. He is loved and appreciated by all but remains with his cold character and his expressionless face.
Because of his Swordless Dao, Zhong Liang was getting colder, indifferent, and cruel, so his Master, fearful that he would turn to the demonic cultivator, decides to put three young disciples to serve him and keep him company, whether in missions outside the sect or even in as servants of this great prodigy.
The Master of Zhong Liang wanted him to develop some kind of bond that would prevent him from getting lost in the path of the Dao of the Swordless Thrill.
Unfortunately, Zhong Liang doesn't agree with his master's vision and astounds all the young disciples, only one remains he is as firm as a sword stuck in the ground, this disciple is Zemin Yan.
"Senior Zhong, do you want grapes or apples?" Asked Zemin Yan with his typical silly smile.
Zhong Liang didn't respond and continued training with his sword, he just ignored the existence of this young disciple.
"So it's going to be grapes," Zemin Yan said without even letting his mood fall, he had already grown accustomed to the lack of response from his senior disciple.
When Zemin Yan came back to call Zhong Liang for dinner, the grapes were far from visible, which left Zemin Yan with a silly and contented smile for the rest of the night.
NOTE:
1. R 18 (IN THE FUTURE)
2. Slow Romance
3. Romance 1x1.
4. Contest 59.
5. COVER: POPPY QUEEN
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Title: The Path of the Sword Suitable age: 18+ Genre: Eastern Fantasy Content: Yaio, *** between men, romance, adventure and friendship. Chapters: +100 Hello, people here is the author, this is my second BL story, I sincerely hope you like it. These two weeks I will dedicate myself exclusively to this story because I want to win the prize, then it will be daily posts. Support me and go read the other BL story! Xoxo
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ML! 😍😍😍😍😍😍 And the new ship! BL 😍😍😍😘💝💕💖💞 ............................ ....................... I want to know what Wen Jie and Shou Zuo are doing in this room! With details!
Great story and enjoyable to read a complete page turner and well planed plot and characters entices you from the very beginning the story not rushed and is overall a good novel.
Do love how this story is unraveling itself! Just some few grammatical mistakes along the way especially concerning the pronouns used for genders. Have a bit of trouble understanding the plot but love the development.
The story is fun to read and all. But the pace is so slow that you'll die even before the novel ends. LOL. It's already in 140 and his age is still the same. I kid you not. As fun as the novel is, the pacing kills. I don't mind long novels, but the MC is aging way too slowly.
Because just I can! Well I like the fake pig MC! It's a MC (uke) different! 😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😏 ....................................................................................................... ... .
Swrod is indeed a great weapon in martial arts... its weight its sharpness.. the flexibility of it with the combination of the owner's experty in the world of sword... it will bring the a great advantage...
Overall, the story itself was good. The world-building was very in depth and thorough. It weaved nicely with the plot at the beginning. The character interactions were also interesting to read. However, with good things, there are always bad things. The writing could use more editing and proofreading. There were several cases of awkward wording and redundancy. Some sentences were very lengthy and the grammar could be improved. The one thing I want to point out are the commas; there are too much of them! For example: (SPOILER-ish) "This happened hundreds of years ago, now all the heroes are already dead and humanity does not even remember them, only the sects keep the teachings of the heroes, but now a new war if the next, so the sects are hunting talents in all the lands from the great imperial capital to the most humble of the villages, the sects are also not distinguishing status, from an important prince to a poor beggar for participating in the selection of the sect." This is all one sentence, connected by many, many commas. Several of these clauses could be separated by periods to complete a whole thought instead. However, the author did mention that he/she has not edited some of the chapters, so I'm sure it will be fixed soon. Other than this, the story itself is pretty good. Keep writing, author-san!
Fun and captive I'm enjoying it right now. Loving the innocent if the main character and his relationship with the others hopefully the story picks up soon
I love the story but wish they could UPDATE more chapters. But hey friends it a very nice BL novel.😎😎😎😘😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍
Author, when are you going to update. I really want to know, waiting is killing me. (〒﹏〒) I want more. Please update more. I will support you but please don't keep procastinating.
What I like about the novel was that the chapters were long and very well arranged felt like some typical chinese drama with a lot more details. I liked that. Just that there were some glitches here and there that broke the flow a bit but since I like such fantasies and stuffs I read it anyway. One more thing, since the chapters are long, if read on a mobile, it gets tiring and long paras in the initial chapters makes it confusing at times. Work on that. Over all I liked the novel and those who like fantasies and fights, can definitely give it go. Keep it up author.
I like the storyline and the characters it's just it is hard to read as there are a lot of mistakes like missing words... I just think you should get an editor. Well other than that keep up the work also is this translated or is this your original work? Just want to know. Great work!
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