In the Shadow of a Storm
There are no Gods now in the severed world of Faeraq Mae. The races of Divines, Endahins and the humans had fought against their own idols to end their tyranny. Amidst the chaos, reside the masses without any firm sovereignty, obliquely suffering in the shadows. Four among them have survived through madness in their separate roads to attaining serenity. Tristan has lost everything- his home, his parents, his village, and even his mind. Bedona has lost the goodwill of her Mentor, and her morality. Raivi has lost his only friend to the whims of the Sorcerer King. And Lyle has for long been muddled in petty complications. Their lone journeys intertwine to reveal the broken desperation of mankind beneath the atrocities of their superiors.
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It's a rich story you can tell. Give it some time if you don't like reading unnecessary details. the writer knows how to cut to the chase. and frankly that's a big deal for me. I recommend it.
"One of my favourite new novels. The author is having fun with the story you can tell. Bedona's character is interesting and powerful. I am waiting to see what he does with her. So far I'm hooked!"
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First and foremost for me is consistency in the plot. It should not slow down completely or pick up an unmatchable speed. This novel is a breath of fresh air and has a big potential to rank high if the author manages the quality and upload stability. I hope they don’t disappoint me.
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The story is progressing at an exciting pace. Waiting to read about the remaining 3 leads and their side of the story. Instant LOVE!!!! I'm really digging this! 😂😂😂
This is pretty Great.... The details and the flow of the story is so interesting.... and a lil thrilling. Keep.uploading soon. Looking forward!
Srsly this is awesome!!! I agree this should get more recognition. The cold environtment is well captured. Gotta share with some friends. UPDATE SOON! Can't Wait!!
Vivid description with beautiful imagination. I'm surprised this one doesn't have any reviews yet. The sorry has stepped up from the very first chap. Hope to read more ASAP.
It's too early to form an opinion but I'm liking the speed of the story so far. You're keeping it all to the point. Good work so far elsbro.