In the process of rewriting completely, 1st chapter isn't finished yet. But you should try it out new ploy and better grammar will rewrite this soon!
To short every chapter, you must read your own story. Please add more like (,.!? "') for beter be read.......
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If possible I would like someone to write a comment on my novel as I believe it could help me get better as I’m new to this ✌🏻gave myself rating cuz why not
To short every chapter, you must read your own story. Please add more like (,.!? "') for beter be read.......
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If possible I would like someone to write a comment on my novel as I believe it could help me get better as I’m new to this ✌🏻gave myself rating cuz why not