Second Chance - To Live Again

The book is has potential. Although there are errors. Try to spread out your sentences and it would be advice to click enter twice when writing a new paragraph. Because your work is really clustered. Also, never start a sentence with small letters, use capital letters cause its the correct format of writing in English language. But generally, I liked the book, can't wait to see how it unfolds.

Well, well, well, another good story out here..👍 Writing quality is quite good. (Easy to understand) The plot has a quite twist in the beginning, which is cool. (Thats why i give it a five) ✋ Characters design and world building lack details, might be because it has only few chapters. (Guess it will be develop slowly...) Overall, this an interesting one. Good job bringing her world into life.😊 Keep it up!👍

To bad...to bad this story be dropped..it is very interesting story..mystery..ancient to modern..very powerful clan..still a lot to be exposed,we lost another best story.

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I like the story flows... It was interesting and good to read... It has a potential to be accepted to anyone... Though there are some errors but the author Va fix it anyway... So, I hope that it will continue and good job for providing us one of an interesting story...

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Took a chance and started to read this book. I'm glad I did the plot is good, character is easy to like and you are left wanting more. I gave five stars as I believe that this story can go far. Could be translated in to a t.v. Drama.

I like it, it does not feel completely cliche as other novels on the genre... Hope it continues like this. And the mcs are cute together That was my review now give me my sp 😂😂

This novel can become really good, there are still errors in the writing especially in grammar, but don't let that stop you from reading. This is a novel of face slaps, a strong FL who can fight and a complex mess of family problems and rich people. Not only that, the schemes are crazy to the point of murdering one for wealth (cough *that mother of hers* cough). Mm, but everyone is scheming and Fu Ya is gonna need an army of loyal people to fight against all of them enemies.

I love the concept of this book. I like strong FL. Writing quality is ok. There are some mistakes but overall is good. The character and story are quite catchy. Like i said, I love strong FL. Seems there's mystery that needed to be solved like her past. I hope that will be explained. It's bad that she didn't get her revenge.😁

This book is interesting, it has a good revenge/face-slapping concept. The writing quality is okay and it is fun to read. The ML suits the FL well. The cover looks nice. Good job:)

This story is very interesting😊 I like the concept of transmigrating from the historical times to the modern times. I also like that the protagonist is not entirely clueless about the new world. She is also smart, good at martial arts and knows how to intimidate others. I really like this protagonist. The protagonist's traits and qualities (such as having a strong pride and being able to stay calm) make her a really likeable. The only part I find confusing is that the protagonist was still in a state of depression when she was in the historical world. After that, she quickly changed to someone who was strong and firm when it came to the modern world. It's understandable since she was only depressed because of her lover's 'death', but how did she fall in love with him when she is meant to be intelligent? I like how the relationship between the protagonist and her grandparents develop. It's really cool that the protagonist is a good actor😊. One minute she's coy and the next she is calm and indifferent. It's intriguing that so many people underestimate the protagonist, including her own bodyguard. Although there may be some errors regarding grammar,, this story is one of the most interesting out of the ones I have read.😊 I find sometimes that the tense is not correct Example: Chapter 14: 'causing the man seethed in rage' It might be easier to read if it was instead - 'causing the man to seethe in rage' There are a few places where the pronouns 'he' and 'she are mixed up. I feel that in Chapter 16, the way Director Chin greeted the protagonist was very familiar considering they hadn't met before. Suggestion: (chapter 16) '..."This must be Young Miss Fu?" Asked him, confirming...' - excerpt from the story. I feel that it would make more sense if it was: '..."This must be Young Miss Fu?" He asked, confirming...' Other than some minor mistakes, the writing quality is very good. This story is extremely interesting and engaging😊.

Really interesting book, totally love it. The whole concept is extremely captivating, and the story line is enticing. Keep it up author, you are doing a great job. Can't wait to read more.