Our Lovestory [On-Hiatus]

Our Lovestory [On-Hiatus]

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Author: _Rain
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Elsa woke up early and found out that she thinks about her classmate too often.



She didn't want to believe that she had a crush on him as she was sure he wouldn't fall for her.



She keeps telling herself not to fall in love with him.



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Ray , soon found out that he had a crush on his friend's friend and didn't know when it all began.



He wanted to pursue her but didn't know whether she feels the same or not.



He wanted to know her feelings first, so that he can do something about his feeling's inside him.



This novel is about their up's and down's and how they get together.



It's a bumpy roller coaster ride .. hope you guys have your seatbelts on, as the male and female leads are surely strapped in.



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Hey everyone, I'm really excited and nervous for my novel.Please do guide me in this journey.

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cyprianita
cyprianita

Reveal Spoiler

6 years ago
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ifybaby03
ifybaby03

Interesting and captivating storyline filled with fun-loving characters. ๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿ˜˜

6 years ago
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Gourmet_DAO
Gourmet_DAO

Reveal Spoiler

6 years ago
2
Ilze
Ilze

Hi oh my goodness I love your novel I can't stop reading and laughing at them and I can't wait for the updates to come I'm really looking forward to it and I will support you.

6 years ago
2
VateRise
VateRise

Who would've thought that DarkRay would get his own char. In a novel ๐Ÿ˜‚ In all seriousness. This is a hidden gem. I'm not the type of person who reads romances, but this? I can't wait to find out more. It's so simple yet interesting. Author does a good job there. Quality is nice, development too, loads of feelings... Added to the library, thanks for sharing this!

6 years ago
2
May1st
May1st

I love this novel, the fl is kinda cute, Its funny when she burst into tears๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜‚ I also love that it's based on a real life story, am gonna read this to the end. I will also recommend it to my fellow readers๐Ÿ˜—๐Ÿ˜—๐Ÿ˜—๐Ÿ˜—๐Ÿ˜—๐Ÿ˜—๐Ÿ˜—๐Ÿ˜— Writting quality is not bad, am a failure at grammar myself, but based on a reader perspective, I think your grammar is nice. Well done๐Ÿ˜—๐Ÿ˜—๐Ÿ˜—๐Ÿ˜—๐Ÿ˜—

6 years ago
2
Chase_Xavier_123
Chase_Xavier_123

Here I thought i was gonna see snow but all i saw was beautiful story. But my bad it's on hiatus right now. i will be waiting for you author.

4 years ago
1
RounakVyasSharma
RounakVyasSharma

This is such a happy story๐Ÿฅฐ๐Ÿฅฐ๐Ÿฅฐ๐Ÿฅฐ๐Ÿฅฐ The character development is good plus the college setting is realistic. The romance is fresh. We will patiently wait for the update but please do continue the story.

4 years ago
1
Krizzeir
Krizzeir

Nice storyline. It's based in the real world. Probably Indian. From all the Kurti and stuff. Looks good from how the author presents the story. Fluffy and funny in between. Nice going. keep up the good work. The viewers of this genre will love it. Keep going.

5 years ago
1
FallenButterfly
FallenButterfly

Grammar wise, its good. The story's pace is quite nice, it doesn't feel rushed nor slow. Just going with the flow. I haven't read much but I bet this will be a great story,. Keep up the good work Ms. Author. I also have a story I hope you can check it out ~ Thank you.

5 years ago
1
MAKKAPATI
MAKKAPATI

This story is interesting as it's not like the usual CEO stories. Though I'm not really fond of romantic stories but this one caught my attention. Grammar is good. Keep it up author! ๐Ÿ˜‰

5 years ago
1
KrazyWriter
KrazyWriter

I love stories that show different character perspectives, so I really liked yours. As far as I read the story was top, well structured and with few mistakes, so I recommend it to everyone.

5 years ago
1
lazylyn
lazylyn

Thank you authorย  plz updates daily i like your novel ๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜โค๐Ÿ˜Šโค๐Ÿ˜Šโค๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿ˜˜โคโค๐Ÿ˜˜โค๐Ÿ˜˜โค๐Ÿ˜˜โค๐Ÿ˜˜โค๐Ÿ˜˜โค๐Ÿ˜˜โค๐Ÿ˜˜โค๐Ÿ˜˜โค๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿ˜˜โค๐Ÿ˜Šโค๐Ÿ˜Šโค๐Ÿ˜Šโคโค๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Šโค๐Ÿ˜Šโคโค๐Ÿ˜Šโค๐Ÿ˜Šโค๐Ÿ˜Šโค๐Ÿ˜Šโค๐Ÿ˜Šโค๐Ÿ˜Šโค๐Ÿ˜Šโค๐Ÿ˜ŠThank you authorย  plz updates daily i like your novel ๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜โค๐Ÿ˜Šโค๐Ÿ˜Šโค๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿ˜˜โคโค๐Ÿ˜˜โค๐Ÿ˜˜โค๐Ÿ˜˜โค๐Ÿ˜˜โค๐Ÿ˜˜โค๐Ÿ˜˜โค๐Ÿ˜˜โค๐Ÿ˜˜โค๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿ˜˜โค๐Ÿ˜Šโค๐Ÿ˜Šโค๐Ÿ˜Šโคโค๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Šโค๐Ÿ˜Šโคโค๐Ÿ˜Šโค๐Ÿ˜Šโค๐Ÿ˜Šโค๐Ÿ˜Šโค๐Ÿ˜Šโค๐Ÿ˜Šโค๐Ÿ˜Šโค๐Ÿ˜ŠThank you authorย  plz updates daily i like your novel ๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜โค๐Ÿ˜Šโค๐Ÿ˜Šโค๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿ˜˜โคโค๐Ÿ˜˜โค๐Ÿ˜˜โค๐Ÿ˜˜โค๐Ÿ˜˜โค๐Ÿ˜˜โค๐Ÿ˜˜โค๐Ÿ˜˜โค๐Ÿ˜˜โค๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿ˜˜โค๐Ÿ˜Šโค๐Ÿ˜Šโค๐Ÿ˜Šโคโค๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Šโค๐Ÿ˜Šโคโค๐Ÿ˜Šโค๐Ÿ˜Šโค๐Ÿ˜Šโค๐Ÿ˜Šโค๐Ÿ˜Šโค๐Ÿ˜Šโค๐Ÿ˜Šโค๐Ÿ˜ŠThank you authorย  plz updates daily i like your novel ๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜โค๐Ÿ˜Šโค๐Ÿ˜Šโค๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿ˜˜โคโค๐Ÿ˜˜โค๐Ÿ˜˜โค๐Ÿ˜˜โค๐Ÿ˜˜โค๐Ÿ˜˜โค๐Ÿ˜˜โค๐Ÿ˜˜โค๐Ÿ˜˜โค๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿ˜˜โค๐Ÿ˜Šโค๐Ÿ˜Šโค๐Ÿ˜Šโคโค๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Šโค๐Ÿ˜Šโคโค๐Ÿ˜Šโค๐Ÿ˜Šโค๐Ÿ˜Šโค๐Ÿ˜Šโค๐Ÿ˜Šโค๐Ÿ˜Šโค๐Ÿ˜Šโค๐Ÿ˜ŠThank you authorย  plz updates daily i like your novel ๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜โค๐Ÿ˜Šโค๐Ÿ˜Šโค๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿ˜˜โคโค๐Ÿ˜˜โค๐Ÿ˜˜โค๐Ÿ˜˜โค๐Ÿ˜˜โค๐Ÿ˜˜โค๐Ÿ˜˜โค๐Ÿ˜˜โค๐Ÿ˜˜โค๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿ˜˜โค๐Ÿ˜Šโค๐Ÿ˜Šโค๐Ÿ˜Šโคโค๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Šโค๐Ÿ˜Šโคโค๐Ÿ˜Šโค๐Ÿ˜Šโค๐Ÿ˜Šโค๐Ÿ˜Šโค๐Ÿ˜Šโค๐Ÿ˜Šโค๐Ÿ˜Šโค๐Ÿ˜Š

5 years ago
1
Peachwoodgirl6
Peachwoodgirl6

As a engineering student I can understand the surrounding it was just like the flash back, and about the story I really liked it a lot, I am in love with Ray, it gives me goosebumps sometimes because story is so genuine and I can Imagine things happening in front of me. I will look forward to it. Keep up the good work author.

5 years ago
1
Gold_Paper_Crane
Gold_Paper_Crane

This novel reminded me of high school love. So pure and sweet. The rush of heartbeats are very exciting! I love how you describe each characters and also the situation in detail. It really helps to picture it better. Keep up the good work!

5 years ago
1