Gourmet_DAO

The second version. 

Agriculture is a very interesting activity. Like the sale of products. Not to mention the cooking, healing cooking. The development of tourism. 


All this will be in this novel. Perhaps the continuation of the first novel, but not a fact.

What is the story about? The story of a graduate student who decided to become a farmer. He sold his apartment and started to run his business with the money he received. Farm, online shop, farm shop. Decided to sell organic food.

Who is this guy? Former student of the Faculty of History. His relatives are historians and artisans, scientists. Great-grandfather Farmer. Grandfather - oriental sweets manufacturer. His ancestor ... Dara is the hero of another novel "'Jiang' Magic Coin" ...

What happens to him? He finds magic coins that have already become a magic entity, he has an all-powerful system. The main character does not immediately use it ...

Why should I care? It is interesting. But not at once. Not from the first pages, there is interesting historical information, there is an understanding of everyday life, traditions, oriental subtleties of doing business.

Almost reality but in a fantastic wrapper.

Pros - good content, many different historical facts about the Silk Road, Eastern Trade, Household reflections on politics and economics, there are interesting ideas for organizing your own business in tourism and farming.

Cons - bad form, that is, the text of the novel is rough, grammar and syntax is lame. There are mistakes.

Overall assessment of the story if to be objective:

Writing Quality - 2 stars
Stability of Updates - 4 stars (3-4 times per week from 500 to 3000 words for one chapter)

Story Development - 4 stars
Character Design - 3 stars
World Background - 3 stars

Overall result: Who wants to learn new things about farming and about the world after the Cold War, who is interested in the first place content, can be sure that he/she will not waste his/her time in vain.

Whoever likes the good form of the syllable, he/she can immediately leave, having pulled his hat, striking his/her horse sideways with spurs, plunge into the depths of the prairie.


Tags - Farming, Cooking, Health, Folk Medicine, Magic, History


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This is a work of art. Any resemblance to real people or real events is purely coincidental.

Magic Farmer Dara - 2nd Edition

On the other side of the mountain, where there was an abandoned mine. 


"The signal has passed that there may be an ancient artifact for the search for a portal, one for the southern continent!"


- Oh, you are a black guild, shield and sword !!! 


"We are looking, we are looking! Your device is not as accurate as we thought ..., rather, it is even wonderful." 


"It gives us the powers of enlightenment, the head starts to work better, the thoughts are all clear, but the side effect we start to fart, the smell is like butter."


 "In our work, this is a risk of being detected by smell!" 


- Yes, what just does not happen in the world! 


- Hey, don't call me your lordship, just call me Dara. 


- I am from farmers, not an aristocrat, although I will have a grandfather from yours, from my world, also in the association of a shield and a sword! Ahahahahaha! 


"So, you are our senior, it is amazing that even in another world, our association is!" 


- Well, this is quite natural, we inherited it from the second northern empire, before that there was just a secret guard of the emir and before that khan and before that the emperor of the great central steppes. 


"That the northern empire had access to other worlds"? 


 Probably yes, but who will say for sure, the archives are still closed, although there is no second northern empire now, for 45 years already! 


- The archives are still closed, which leads to some thoughts ... but this is already empty talk. 


- Well, once you understand, go ahead lazy.


The week before ...