Gourmet_DAO

The second version. 

Agriculture is a very interesting activity. Like the sale of products. Not to mention the cooking, healing cooking. The development of tourism. 


All this will be in this novel. Perhaps the continuation of the first novel, but not a fact.

What is the story about? The story of a graduate student who decided to become a farmer. He sold his apartment and started to run his business with the money he received. Farm, online shop, farm shop. Decided to sell organic food.

Who is this guy? Former student of the Faculty of History. His relatives are historians and artisans, scientists. Great-grandfather Farmer. Grandfather - oriental sweets manufacturer. His ancestor ... Dara is the hero of another novel "'Jiang' Magic Coin" ...

What happens to him? He finds magic coins that have already become a magic entity, he has an all-powerful system. The main character does not immediately use it ...

Why should I care? It is interesting. But not at once. Not from the first pages, there is interesting historical information, there is an understanding of everyday life, traditions, oriental subtleties of doing business.

Almost reality but in a fantastic wrapper.

Pros - good content, many different historical facts about the Silk Road, Eastern Trade, Household reflections on politics and economics, there are interesting ideas for organizing your own business in tourism and farming.

Cons - bad form, that is, the text of the novel is rough, grammar and syntax is lame. There are mistakes.

Overall assessment of the story if to be objective:

Writing Quality - 2 stars
Stability of Updates - 4 stars (3-4 times per week from 500 to 3000 words for one chapter)

Story Development - 4 stars
Character Design - 3 stars
World Background - 3 stars

Overall result: Who wants to learn new things about farming and about the world after the Cold War, who is interested in the first place content, can be sure that he/she will not waste his/her time in vain.

Whoever likes the good form of the syllable, he/she can immediately leave, having pulled his hat, striking his/her horse sideways with spurs, plunge into the depths of the prairie.


Tags - Farming, Cooking, Health, Folk Medicine, Magic, History


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This is a work of art. Any resemblance to real people or real events is purely coincidental.

Magic Farmer Dara - 2nd Edition

The foothill plain seemed endless, mountains were visible on the horizon. That was where they needed it. While Dar's teleportation did not always work accurately, sometimes he was mistaken 1-2 km from the desired point.


- Master, with our speed we will be at the mountains in 5 minutes, do not worry!


"I wonder if it is possible to smelt this metal from the mountains"?


- Many innocent people, monsters, animals, plants, spirits, gnomes can live there ?! You want to destroy them all ????


"Ah, I didn't think about it! Yes, you're right, let's not just humiliate innocent creatures like that!"


"Well then, you will dig in the mountain to look for the metal crystals of" dawn "we need!


- Master, I will find better specialists in this!


- You yourself said that if you cut a sparrow, then a butcher and not a warrior should do it ?!


"Your truth! Let's look and we will go to the mountains for now!" One black warrior walked away from the retinue and trotted away from them to a small forest.


His master and his retinue of 99 black giants warriors and a small animal lying on the shoulder of a fat man headed for the mountains. The agents of the black guild, a long-range reconnaissance group of shield and sword, were hiding in the forest. They were noticed by a giant warrior who volunteered to find the super specialists.


He was smart but not wise. Therefore, he ran ahead, received a reprimand from the boss and now wanted to quickly solve the problem.


The giant in black armor unexpectedly scooped up 10 agents sitting on the branches of trees, without explaining anything to them, threw them into a sack.


Then they already stood with picks and worked digging a tunnel inside the mountain.


They saw on the cloaks of the giants of warriors coats of arms similar to theirs, a shield and a sword. But they didn't know such a unit in their secret organization


There is no resistance against the force, so they just did their part, hoping to be saved somehow! Soon, the agents found out in the one who gave them orders, that famous maniac, cannibal, monster meat lover, fat wizard, known throughout all continents!


They finally found him!