Gourmet_DAO

The second version. 

Agriculture is a very interesting activity. Like the sale of products. Not to mention the cooking, healing cooking. The development of tourism. 


All this will be in this novel. Perhaps the continuation of the first novel, but not a fact.

What is the story about? The story of a graduate student who decided to become a farmer. He sold his apartment and started to run his business with the money he received. Farm, online shop, farm shop. Decided to sell organic food.

Who is this guy? Former student of the Faculty of History. His relatives are historians and artisans, scientists. Great-grandfather Farmer. Grandfather - oriental sweets manufacturer. His ancestor ... Dara is the hero of another novel "'Jiang' Magic Coin" ...

What happens to him? He finds magic coins that have already become a magic entity, he has an all-powerful system. The main character does not immediately use it ...

Why should I care? It is interesting. But not at once. Not from the first pages, there is interesting historical information, there is an understanding of everyday life, traditions, oriental subtleties of doing business.

Almost reality but in a fantastic wrapper.

Pros - good content, many different historical facts about the Silk Road, Eastern Trade, Household reflections on politics and economics, there are interesting ideas for organizing your own business in tourism and farming.

Cons - bad form, that is, the text of the novel is rough, grammar and syntax is lame. There are mistakes.

Overall assessment of the story if to be objective:

Writing Quality - 2 stars
Stability of Updates - 4 stars (3-4 times per week from 500 to 3000 words for one chapter)

Story Development - 4 stars
Character Design - 3 stars
World Background - 3 stars

Overall result: Who wants to learn new things about farming and about the world after the Cold War, who is interested in the first place content, can be sure that he/she will not waste his/her time in vain.

Whoever likes the good form of the syllable, he/she can immediately leave, having pulled his hat, striking his/her horse sideways with spurs, plunge into the depths of the prairie.


Tags - Farming, Cooking, Health, Folk Medicine, Magic, History


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This is a work of art. Any resemblance to real people or real events is purely coincidental.

Magic Farmer Dara - 2nd Edition

Before the eyes of the Dara, a huge screen, invisible to others, stretched out. On it were visible ruins removed by drones, with an explanation to them, what kind of buildings, how they looked before, where the weapons and storage facilities were located.


 The treasury, the library, as well as the history of these ruins, when they appeared, by whom they were built, when and because of what they collapsed. 


Who from this empire survived, where did they go, where to look for them? The information, of course, was shared by the Obaki, for a certain amount of white crystals. Braybury is the only possible way to obtain detailed information about the other world.


 Obaki had the most detailed documentary database of all the worlds they were in. The system no longer bothered Dara, apparently it was tied only to the valley of monsters. Which didn't really bother the fat man. Living in another world was fun in its own way. Any of his whims were fulfilled. 


Dara, in theory, could build any ideal world. He had opponents, his strength was the most powerful in all the worlds of the lower, middle, upper and the remaining 1000 worlds of this part of the new other world. But this, too, gradually eats up, and Dara, adhered to the limiting desires, internal rules, what is considered "good" and what is "bad". 


One place on the map was glowing blue. It was here in ancient times that the main gateway, port, gates connecting 4 continents with each other were located.


 When activated once all 4, another invisible gateway was opened to go to the middle world. There was the same system for going to the upper world. So what is next…


"I don't want to wander for a million years in 1000 worlds of this other world"! 


"There is probably an easier way to go through all these tests through the back door!" 


"I don't believe that the developers of this world would not leave a" cheating "code that allows you to bypass all these searches and walking of all gates"? 


Dara, during his collaboration with Obaki, had two hundred and two friends from the space center. So they often communicated with each other without much formalities. 


 - Of course, but it all depends on your generosity! 


"Yesterday I was offered a different price, any product for 50 thousand white crystals "! !


 - You did not deceive, indeed, you offered! 


- You, bro, have become completely arrogant, well, well, let's get together at 49,000! 


 It is necessary to bargain everywhere, and not immediately agree to the first offered price. So sellers will respect the buyer more. Typically oriental tradition, it worked in this other world too! 


- You activate 15 gates, in each you add a large white crystal and the core of the monster of destruction of worlds, 16 gates open and you name the place where you want to get! 


- Yes, in your case it is possible! You will help us too! 


 - Well, bro, not all at once, we will slowly come to this! 


- Well, for now, the series has begun there, which I'm watching!


 Communication with the Obaki Space Center was cut. 


"Well, yeah, okay, let's activate this gate!"


"I wonder how I can help them"?