Gourmet_DAO

The second version. 

Agriculture is a very interesting activity. Like the sale of products. Not to mention the cooking, healing cooking. The development of tourism. 


All this will be in this novel. Perhaps the continuation of the first novel, but not a fact.

What is the story about? The story of a graduate student who decided to become a farmer. He sold his apartment and started to run his business with the money he received. Farm, online shop, farm shop. Decided to sell organic food.

Who is this guy? Former student of the Faculty of History. His relatives are historians and artisans, scientists. Great-grandfather Farmer. Grandfather - oriental sweets manufacturer. His ancestor ... Dara is the hero of another novel "'Jiang' Magic Coin" ...

What happens to him? He finds magic coins that have already become a magic entity, he has an all-powerful system. The main character does not immediately use it ...

Why should I care? It is interesting. But not at once. Not from the first pages, there is interesting historical information, there is an understanding of everyday life, traditions, oriental subtleties of doing business.

Almost reality but in a fantastic wrapper.

Pros - good content, many different historical facts about the Silk Road, Eastern Trade, Household reflections on politics and economics, there are interesting ideas for organizing your own business in tourism and farming.

Cons - bad form, that is, the text of the novel is rough, grammar and syntax is lame. There are mistakes.

Overall assessment of the story if to be objective:

Writing Quality - 2 stars
Stability of Updates - 4 stars (3-4 times per week from 500 to 3000 words for one chapter)

Story Development - 4 stars
Character Design - 3 stars
World Background - 3 stars

Overall result: Who wants to learn new things about farming and about the world after the Cold War, who is interested in the first place content, can be sure that he/she will not waste his/her time in vain.

Whoever likes the good form of the syllable, he/she can immediately leave, having pulled his hat, striking his/her horse sideways with spurs, plunge into the depths of the prairie.


Tags - Farming, Cooking, Health, Folk Medicine, Magic, History


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This is a work of art. Any resemblance to real people or real events is purely coincidental.

Magic Farmer Dara - 2nd Edition

- And you Dara, turns out to be not as scary as rumor has it? 


 - You don't want to know what they say about you?


 "No, I'm generally from another world, I'm not interested, here today, tomorrow to my home, or maybe to a new world"! 


- So, what are you serious from another world? 


"Yes, I was quietly engaged in farming, our world is more developed than yours, there is no magic, but there are cultivators and cosmic power, magic coins"! 


"The first to attack, the first to win!"


 "If no one attacks me, then I will not attack anyone either!" 


- Why, you destroyed entire kingdoms, ate the tails of monsters, many nobles and commoners disappeared !? 


"No, I'm not a tyrant, I didn't kill anyone just like that, and even then, this is the first time, besides, I have the opportunity to keep them in outer space"! 


 On the right side he is the captain, a space rift opened, there emperors, their guards, prime ministers, wives snored peacefully on the mats.


 - Yes! You are cunning! They still think that you are a villain, a maniac !!! 


"That's good, they won't rush into the attack!"


 "Are those who disappeared here too?" 


"No, they work on my new plantations on the uninhabited islands!"


- You are still a maniac, but not a villain! Thank you for the praise! 


- This is not praise, this is my surprise! 


"So I'm not a dictator!" "I just want to go to my world"! 


"It's good with you, but it's better at home!"


- If you look from this point of view, you are right that you want to quickly leave this world! 


"Now you and I will go looking for the ruins!" 


"After that we will either cross to the east or to the western mainland!"


- What are these ruins, ports to other continents? 


"Actually, that's what I'm looking for these ruins for!" 


"But it will be inconvenient to send with me on the way!"


 - I thought that your barrier would not let me through otherwise ?!


Dara, from the cosmic rift, took out for the Captain, a special forces operative's suit, which was still equipped with a white crystal and an annihilation core. The weapon included a magic dagger, a mephril sword, a medium shield. 


A spear. And also a mini crossbow that shoots bone bolts. Breaking through the stone walls of castles and fortresses. Above, he was wearing light but very durable armor made from the shell of the dragon of destruction of the world, which lived 100 million years ago. It was Dar's crafting. He was already tired of the world of magic, he wanted to return to his world.


Dara, wanted to return to his world