Gaia's Wrath

I don't know why you decided to send this to me Rainy but okay. Just because we're friends though doesn't mean I'm going to give you 5 stars. Right now I think it's interesting but your inspiration is bleeding through to much. I know you're not trying to rip a story off but right now it does look like a rip off of a certain story. Even though I know that the plot is wildly different and has a lot more to it others won't. So even though you explained everything that will come later to me I suggest you hurry it up and show how it is different from the other story. I'm trying not to say the name since I know you really didn't rip it off. I mean you had this story idea for almost ten years now but again. Other people won't know that and they might think this is a rip-off. Other than that though I have to say that the plot is okay. It could be better. The characters are okay. They could be better. The fighting is okay. It could be longer. All in all its, not a bad story. Just be careful with it.