Fragments Of Memory (COMPLETED)

I am not hating on this novel but I am literally confused as to how this novel got this high on the leaderboard 2.5/5 for grammar it can be read sure but sometimes i get dis orientes by how 1 paragraph they refer to a character as he then the next they put it. 2/5 for story...There is literally no story whatsoever for the released chapters...what we know is Hanabi almost got killed by Balmond and Tigreal, but as far as i know Balmond is from a clan of war mongering orcs why would he join sides with the Monians? And 3/4 of the entire story is basically just replicating item descriptions from the game, and how the heck those Hanabi get to maxed level immediately just because she killed creeps...what the heck is with that logic?! If so everyone in the Land of Dawn should all be killing each other for every creeps found just to get that exp..but NO they dont they literally just dont give a **** about the minions 1.5/5 for the world buildjng...there really aint nothing said about the world, there is not mention of Hanabis clan🙄 A swan princess can be found participating in a tournament when she should be guarding her lake. Sure im Jealous of the guy/girl cause of how they managed to climb the rank and get so high the board..But i just want a fucking answer how they got thus ranking?

Finally A story that doesn't have so many character ahhh Finally A story that doesn't have so many character ahhh Finally A story that doesn't have so many character ahhh Finally A story that doesn't have so many character ahhh Finally A story that doesn't have so many character ahhh Finally A story that doesn't have so many character ahhh Finally A story that doesn't have so many character ahhh Finally A story that doesn't have so many character ahhh Finally A story that doesn't have so many character ahhh

ahhhhhh another Update GO GO GO GO author Hope other can read this too You can actually compete on top 4 though too bad The gap is big But still I support you go go go

Ahhh Author Update please I can't with the bl going an ah My poor heart can't take this ah Update please MORE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE!!!

Oh You have actually Improved the truth is your first story Is Not that good though but good thing you made a new One hope you continue to do this good luck:)

This is a good story good thing that you changed it already good thing you made the story longer hope you continue the good work and don't lose hope I'm sure you you can do it :)) . . . . .

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