She reincarnated
Amethyst dedicated her life on beating her sister in every possible way. Piano, violin, academic, dance, etc. But she never succeeded. All she wanted was their love, that was directed to her sister, but never hers, she even chased after the man who later on fell in love with her sister. Realizing that she spent too much time on other people, she wanted to change her life but it was too late. Alone in a rundown apartment, lonely, sad and empty. She had nothing. A faithful morning changed her destiny, she met with an accident as she gaze at her sister weeping for her. At her last breath, she smiled and said, "If i had a chance to live again, I will treat you better". And God seems to love playing pranks with her, as she woke up looking down at her little hands-back at her 5 years old self.
I really liked your story, the setup, and the contrast between Amethyst and Ruby. I found it a little bit weird, that all characters were named after stones, but I could live with that.I found the reincarnations a little bit confusing, because it the story kind of repeated.I know that was probably your idea, but I would not repeat the same examples again.Maybe you could also write about how Amethyst was treated before Ruby was born. Last of all I also noticed a few mistakes in the part: "She looked around her familiar yet unfamiliar place in front of her- it was her room. But her room is not pink, it was white when she left it. Did Ruby saved her? And brought her home? But why is her room's colour pink?" I would correct"...But her room is not pink..." to"...But her room was not pink...", because you were writing in simple past before and correct"...Did Ruby saved her?..." to "...Did Ruby save her?...". I really hope you continue your text and that my tips were helpful. Kind regards, ProfessorNooB
Its good so far ! Interesting and Definetely Refreshing Since Others usually had this evil-sister Evil-mom Happening In Them. And this is Just Pure cuteness But I hope That The ML Is deserving of the FL since I Really Like her complex yet Interesting character