I plan fo rewrite this story and make it my own. It's really difficult to stick to a story someone else have write. and make it you own. The story will have a more original and easy to immerse feel for it, I myself was having trouble remember some of the information i wrote.
Basically, I might remove and add some new things to it. The story will more development. True, I have to say that the power level system I have in place is broken and I plan to fix that.
I have been studying how or write stories from some website and so far I have seen an improvement, so I won't ask anyone to stick around, or promise anything. I trust my hard work will pay off.