It's a very good story . . The beginning seems like the writer has a lot of stuff to back it up.. so please continue this wonderful story... also .. try to make it a bit more real... probably adding dangerous characters to the storyline graduAlly . ..
It's a very good story . . The beginning seems like the writer has a lot of stuff to back it up.. so please continue this wonderful story... also .. try to make it a bit more real... probably adding dangerous characters to the storyline graduAlly . ..