SHUT OUT OF PARADISE
Author: kimathynza
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"Omnia vincit Amor; et nos cedamus Amori." ,Virgil quoted.
Translated from Latin meaning "Love conquers all; let us yield to love.".
But what if the love that you are fighting for, would be better off losing to.
Would you still fight for love even if God forbids?
Are you willing to be shut out of paradise?
The story of two lovers who are willing to sacrifice fortune, fame and family for their forbidden love.
Welcome to the world of unvieling lies, secrets, sacrifice, and maybe death.
Malia Carter and
Dylan Haydes, two of the country's famous top models. Would they be able to fight for their secret relationship especially if the one they are into is a sin ?
by Kimberly Atienza
©kimathynza®
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Hi MAD_COLORS here. I'll give you an honest review and I saw your novel because you promoted it in the forum thread and to be honest I'm not a great writer so each time I read stories like yours is kinda exhilarating. I liked the way you started your chapter : 3 I'm 100% clueless when I read through it. Now that I said what I like, here's what I don't like you started sexually very early on it may appeal to some readers but some might not like it if you give it your own spin to it, I can guarantee that your story will be the best, romance between to people takes time and understanding at least that how I understand it. I liked it and I might continue reading because this is the first romance novel I read and its pretty good. If you want an honest review ask me. I'm not gonna bull**** you by saying "WOW this is good!" I mean in the thread people only wants to read your novel if your read theirs so don't believe the people who give an instant 5 star. KEEP IT UP! I'LL BE CHEERING YOUR NOVEL ON!!!!
Adult Content: Likely the best chapters I have found on WebNovel. Written well. Waiting For More. Waiting For More. Waiting For More. Waiting For More.
It has a remarkable start, and keep it up! There are some places proofreading is required. Other than that, it's going quite well! I'm looking forward to more.