Her Sole Desire

Please do take into consideration that this review was given at a time were only three chapters were made public. I was unable to get a complete characterisation of the protagonist, yet this is to be expected, seeing there are only three chapters out at the moment. I do believe the story would benefit of it if we were sooner presented with a more overall idea of her personality. The writing quality could use some polishing but is overall very clear and easily understandable. It is truly a relaxing read. May I give you a hint? It is merely meant to aid you, I apologise if you find it to be uncalled for; It might be beneficial to describe more, meaning you don’t have to rely on simple wording at all times. For example; A very expensive looking car. Instead of writing the above sentence, try to describe the car to us. This doesn’t have to be written in an extremely flamboyant manner, but it would contribute to your story and your reader’s imagination. It is often said as; ‘show, don’t tell’. I believe your work to have potential, I enjoyed the small part I was already able to read and I hope to see you evolve. I wish you all the best, have a wonderful time writing your story.

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This is a very good story and I hope to this author keeps on riding, I'll be standing by for more chapters. So keep up the good work and stay inspired❤️😊

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the synopsis is an eye catching enough... i read it until chapter ten... you could see the characters are improving and building... the narrations are good tooo.... keep going author...

It was a amazing beginning, and the grammar used doesn't show much faults. It is well-written and has a decent plotline. Keep up with the good work!!

I like everything about this story from the start. The narration is excellent in its own way. ☺ The author is doing good job I hope author could keep this pace in future😊 I'll review again after reading more chapters, every chapter is new revelation.

No wonder the novel is thought out and interesting. The author is not a newbie. You get the quality, interesting plot, and the chapters are of decent length. The author doesn't throw romance at you from the 1st chapter. After those 9 chaps. You have no clue whether she will find interest in one guy or another. The tie in with the mafia? Perfect mate. Recommend this. As it's worth to be read.

Very good story, keep up the good work. Love the main character, she knows how to make comebacks like a pro. Writing quality is on point, to my happy surprise, have been reading a few books today, and this one is very good.

Just 4 chapters and I can't comment on it much.. but I love how it started and I'm eager to know how the Fl will get her revenge. This story has potential and I'm looking forward for the chapters. Keep up the good work!❤

A Mystery Romance Revenge story. Waiting for more. Waiting for more. Waiting for more. Waiting for more. Waiting for more. Waiting for more.

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Great story so far and I cannot comment much other than from what I’ve seen. I do like that we see from character building and world setting. Writing quality: Great, not perfect. I do agree with someone that commented that can use more descriptive words and such: Updating: can’t tell yet since it just started but hope author keeps frequent updates. Story, character, and world development are great and nothing else comment form me. Good luck with the future updates author!!! Great read and look forward for more.

Well it's too early to judge since there is only two chapters available, however, the start is good. I can sense an immense potential in this book. Keep going authorsan!