saiyan in elemental nations

Notice: I only got to the third chapter before I dropped. I wouldn’t recommend this to people who are looking for a good story... Grammar-3, it’s readable, not many glaring errors. ( then again I only read till chapter 3) Stability of updates: 4, has a decent amount of chapters in a short period of time. Story development: 1, it is moving way too quickly, there needs to be more detail don't just give the reader an overview, actually write the scene, show us the progression on how he got to that level or place. Character development:0.5, there is a lack of detail in everything, it's all just a quick summary or an overview. This ties in with what I wrote in the story development. If you had taken the time to develop your character, such as writing a chapter where he interacted with his parents, it would give us a better idea of how he thinks. So really, write more of him interacting with other characters. Read other novels to get an idea of how it's done. World building: 2, the author does show the effect the main character has in the world, but again more detail. Overall, this is just lazy writing, this can be an amazing novel, just add more detail. Work on fleshing out your main character put him in scenes or situations where he has to think, give us more of an idea on the kind of person he is. I would recommend going back and just rewriting the whole thing. ...I hope this review can be helpful to not only the author but as well as potential readers.