Transported into the body of a nine-year-old boy from the past, now known as Travis, he must forge his way through his new life using his knowledge of the future, but in this strange new landscape, is his knowlege of the future even that reliable?
I really like my own book, haha. But seriously, I hope you guys enjoy it and give it a good read! I'm hoping to release chapters as fast as I can but I want to make sure I take enough time that the story is great and not rushed.
6 years ago
7
Water0202020
From an objective view, this is a well-written novel with proper pacing and development. Even the writing is fluid with proper transition (a rarity in most webnovel). Similarly, characters are relatively believable and MC has moments of bad decision.
As such, I would say that this is a novel I can recommend and give high ratings to.
Nonetheless, from a personal point of view, I find myself at crossroads in chapter 8. To be precise, at the concept of preservationists.
Not the fault of plot or anything (it is still good), but my own haste(and personal taste). The concept reminded me of a standard 'kindle book'. I was instead expecting a similar direction to first 7 chapters (before the 'great reveal' and 'grand escape').
All in all, it is a great book. I would recommend it to others, though it is not my taste.
6 years ago
7
AsianLadyBoy
*He is not the only one that is from the future*
i know that this one thing kills any novel for people so that way you know before you start reading.
*Some Spoilers ahead*
The MC is transmigrated in to the body of a 9year old boy from the past, not his own body. His situation is not so good because his moms a piece of sh*t and his dad is also a piece of sh*t. I don't know why but he starts to try and help his mother out of the situation even though he hates her for what she has done to him. I would understand if she was a good mother to him but she was not.
He makes allot of decisions that makes no sense, he's not a kid. His body is, but his mind is not. So you would think he would make clearer decisions, but he does not.
The whole, hes not the only person from the future is something that I don't like, I was okay with there being one other person from the future that he knows. And i was excited to see what both of them will do to change the future for the better. But then you decided to add a f*cking Organization that stops people that are from the future, from changing the timeline.
At that point I knew that it was not what I expected from reading the synopsis. As well as knowing that this novel will be filled with people from the future with allot of forced drama.
If you like transmigration story's about a male MC and a female MC making quick and rash decisions, while it blows up in there face later. Then them not being able to do what they wanted to do, like change the future for the better. Because theirs a secret organization that wont allow them to, because if they do, they will kill them. Then more then likely weird forced dramatic situations while throwing in more people from the future to stir up more drama.
Then this novel is for you.
Its not something i like but you may.
5 years ago
6
hans02
Reveal Spoiler
5 years ago
2
More_Sugar_Please
Holy **** the first chapter was just wow. The only thing that was missing was a kid in the corner yelling, “WORLD STAR!!!!!!” when the fight scene happened.
6 years ago
2
no_nope
I started to read this comic because of an ad on Instagram and I'm glad I decided to, because this story grabbed my attention with the fist page I had be a while since I have read a story like this one.
5 years ago
2
CocoaButter
This novel had the great potential but unfortunately despite the amazing writing the main character lacks common sense. For example his family situation, they're not his real parents so he can reasonably call the police for the abuse the body he transmigrated to suffered. But no suddenly there is forgiveness and strange compassion for strangers who beat him.
That's one separate matter, the other is he doesnt act like his mental age you would think, he makes childish mistakes. Also has unrealistic expectations. Plus the author seems to forget that the mc age is 9, how can he sign papers without a guardian consent. Last thing I was frustrated with is he cannot even handle a little girl's enquiries. He seems threatened, it's bizarre. The writing is incredible but the plot and main character has lots of issues.
5 years ago
2
JStyles
This could have been a great story but the author made it garbage.His father almost killed him and his mother, he instead of calling police like a sane person ran away like a bitcch and started telling ppl about future and started placing bets.He knew his father could kill his mother at any time but that **** ran away
5 years ago
1
Minsona
I really do like how this novel is going as of chapter 5. The pacing is good, good grammar, and it’s a nice plot that I can get behind. Really look forward to where this story will end up going later on.
6 years ago
1
random1900
I loved the characters. Well hate them, but they are well written nonetheless. The realism is great, and I would write more but I suck at writing unlike the author.
6 years ago
1
Emma_Linton
Keen to find out what happens next. Hooked on this already. Emotionally raw and gripping. I was immersed. Interesting take on the isekai genre.
6 years ago
1
Lazy_dude
Wow just wow😮😮😮😮😮😮😮😮😮😮😲😮😮😮😮😮😮😮😮😮😮😮i just hope author can update more often!don't need to rush tho,quality is better then quantity🤧🤝🤝🤝🤝🤝
6 years ago
1
y13
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6 years ago
0
WELDAN
One of my best and now favorite novel so far. The author's way of writing with a informative word's perspective intrested me.&hhhjsjsbdjwnfbbwbebdbwnrbebnejehejjwhjajasbsh shbsbshsjdbsjbdjsjsjsbsbsbbsnsjsjsjshshhshshshshshhshshshshshshshshshhshshshshshdhdhhdhdhdhshshshshhshshshshshhshshshs
6 years ago
0
Patience_Mfenqa
What a great story the plot is amazing and the character building is great I'm hoping more of this great story in the future keep up the good work
I really like my own book, haha. But seriously, I hope you guys enjoy it and give it a good read! I'm hoping to release chapters as fast as I can but I want to make sure I take enough time that the story is great and not rushed.
From an objective view, this is a well-written novel with proper pacing and development. Even the writing is fluid with proper transition (a rarity in most webnovel). Similarly, characters are relatively believable and MC has moments of bad decision. As such, I would say that this is a novel I can recommend and give high ratings to. Nonetheless, from a personal point of view, I find myself at crossroads in chapter 8. To be precise, at the concept of preservationists. Not the fault of plot or anything (it is still good), but my own haste(and personal taste). The concept reminded me of a standard 'kindle book'. I was instead expecting a similar direction to first 7 chapters (before the 'great reveal' and 'grand escape'). All in all, it is a great book. I would recommend it to others, though it is not my taste.
*He is not the only one that is from the future* i know that this one thing kills any novel for people so that way you know before you start reading. *Some Spoilers ahead* The MC is transmigrated in to the body of a 9year old boy from the past, not his own body. His situation is not so good because his moms a piece of sh*t and his dad is also a piece of sh*t. I don't know why but he starts to try and help his mother out of the situation even though he hates her for what she has done to him. I would understand if she was a good mother to him but she was not. He makes allot of decisions that makes no sense, he's not a kid. His body is, but his mind is not. So you would think he would make clearer decisions, but he does not. The whole, hes not the only person from the future is something that I don't like, I was okay with there being one other person from the future that he knows. And i was excited to see what both of them will do to change the future for the better. But then you decided to add a f*cking Organization that stops people that are from the future, from changing the timeline. At that point I knew that it was not what I expected from reading the synopsis. As well as knowing that this novel will be filled with people from the future with allot of forced drama. If you like transmigration story's about a male MC and a female MC making quick and rash decisions, while it blows up in there face later. Then them not being able to do what they wanted to do, like change the future for the better. Because theirs a secret organization that wont allow them to, because if they do, they will kill them. Then more then likely weird forced dramatic situations while throwing in more people from the future to stir up more drama. Then this novel is for you. Its not something i like but you may.
Reveal Spoiler
Holy **** the first chapter was just wow. The only thing that was missing was a kid in the corner yelling, “WORLD STAR!!!!!!” when the fight scene happened.
I started to read this comic because of an ad on Instagram and I'm glad I decided to, because this story grabbed my attention with the fist page I had be a while since I have read a story like this one.
This novel had the great potential but unfortunately despite the amazing writing the main character lacks common sense. For example his family situation, they're not his real parents so he can reasonably call the police for the abuse the body he transmigrated to suffered. But no suddenly there is forgiveness and strange compassion for strangers who beat him. That's one separate matter, the other is he doesnt act like his mental age you would think, he makes childish mistakes. Also has unrealistic expectations. Plus the author seems to forget that the mc age is 9, how can he sign papers without a guardian consent. Last thing I was frustrated with is he cannot even handle a little girl's enquiries. He seems threatened, it's bizarre. The writing is incredible but the plot and main character has lots of issues.
This could have been a great story but the author made it garbage.His father almost killed him and his mother, he instead of calling police like a sane person ran away like a bitcch and started telling ppl about future and started placing bets.He knew his father could kill his mother at any time but that **** ran away
I really do like how this novel is going as of chapter 5. The pacing is good, good grammar, and it’s a nice plot that I can get behind. Really look forward to where this story will end up going later on.
I loved the characters. Well hate them, but they are well written nonetheless. The realism is great, and I would write more but I suck at writing unlike the author.
Keen to find out what happens next. Hooked on this already. Emotionally raw and gripping. I was immersed. Interesting take on the isekai genre.
Wow just wow😮😮😮😮😮😮😮😮😮😮😲😮😮😮😮😮😮😮😮😮😮😮i just hope author can update more often!don't need to rush tho,quality is better then quantity🤧🤝🤝🤝🤝🤝
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One of my best and now favorite novel so far. The author's way of writing with a informative word's perspective intrested me.&hhhjsjsbdjwnfbbwbebdbwnrbebnejehejjwhjajasbsh shbsbshsjdbsjbdjsjsjsbsbsbbsnsjsjsjshshhshshshshshhshshshshshshshshshhshshshshshdhdhhdhdhdhshshshshhshshshshshhshshshs
What a great story the plot is amazing and the character building is great I'm hoping more of this great story in the future keep up the good work