This is great and very interesting. It shows the HP universe we all know and love in a new and fresh view of it. The MC is smart and is likable. The way he acts and gets his motivation is understandable and doesnt have the hero disease and stupidity of Harry and Ron (no offense but just my opinion). Overall this is a great fanfic that I think I'll be enjoying for a while! So keep it up author and keep pumping out those chapter hahaha
5 years ago
30
Zairys
Best Harry Potter fanfic ever!!! 🤗😍😇 Best Harry Potter fanfic ever!!! 🤗😍😇 Best Harry Potter fanfic ever!!! 🤗😍😇 Best Harry Potter fanfic ever!!! 🤗😍😇 Best Harry Potter fanfic ever!!! 🤗😍😇 Best Harry Potter fanfic ever!!! 🤗😍😇 Best Harry Potter fanfic ever!!! 🤗😍😇 Best Harry Potter fanfic ever!!! 🤗😍😇 Best Harry Potter fanfic ever!!! 🤗😍😇 Best Harry Potter fanfic ever!!! 🤗😍😇 Best Harry Potter fanfic ever!!! 🤗😍😇 Best Harry Potter fanfic ever!!! 🤗😍😇 Best Harry Potter fanfic ever!!! 🤗😍😇 Best Harry Potter fanfic ever!!! 🤗😍😇 Best Harry Potter fanfic ever!!! 🤗😍😇 Best Harry Potter fanfic ever!!! 🤗😍😇
5 years ago
27
Depresso_
Well basically what is said in introduction of story is quite a lie, he isn't seeking revenge or seeking power for that by any means. After his family was killed, he got adopted by muggles and yeah, he consider them more of real parents than his dead ones, even refuses to live with blood relative and choses random strangers hause. As expected of such good boy he's sorted to most stupid hause of Griffindor, making friends and showing his full talent for every teacher to see, even though they will probably use him as tool or make him one of them 'mega pus.sy light justice mage' or something between the lines. So yeah revenge ain't boiling in his blood, he don't hide his secrets like his talent even though he can stay low and secretary learn more knowledge and use other more evil/darker ways to get powerful. Basically same lucky pus.sy like Harry himself, but author make him look all smart. So yeah, if you expected that Mc goes for revenge by any means that's a wrong story for you
5 years ago
25
TheMothMan
Very very good I'd say a 9.5/10
Turmoil at the front
Wilhelm's forces in the hunt
There's a thunder in the east
It's an attack of the deceased
They've been facing poison gas
7000 charge en masse
Turn the tide of the attack
And force the enemy to turn back
And that's when
The dead men
Are marching again
Osowiec then and again
Attack of the dead, hundred men
Facing the led once again
Hundred men charge again die again
Osowiec then and again
Attack of the dead, hundred men
Facing the led once again
Hundred men charge again die again
Two combatants spar
Hindenburg against the Tsar
Move in 12 battalions large
Into Russian counter-charge
They'll be fighting for their lives
As their enemy revives
Russian won't surrender, no
Striking fear into their foe
And that's when
The dead men
Are marching again
Osowiec then and again
Attack of the dead, hundred men
Facing the led once again
Hundred men charge again die again
Osowiec then and again
Attack of the dead, hundred men
Facing the led once again
Hundred men charge again die again
5 years ago
16
dadaoist
The best hp fanfic in this website! Regular update ! Vengeance plot! Thank you author!--------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------
5 years ago
12
Wolfick
Not a bad fan fiction, but far from good. The writing quality is excellent, only some occasional typos, but at least the author knows how to write literature unlike many others.
The story itself on the other end is completely opposite. It severely lacks imagination, and is nothing exciting. The story is exceptionally fast paced, which I don’t mind too much after reading so many hp fanfics, but it’s dull. It simply glosses over everything with “this happened, then that happened, later that happened” scrolling through the entire first year of hogwarts in about 6 chapters.
Characters are lacking depth and other than the occasional “wow” towards the mc who is honestly equally boring, they simply have nothing going for them. They are just there to fill in the blanks on what is less of a story and more a summary.
The first year of the mc, who is in Fred and George’s year, is simply a ripoff of the first book, which is a couple years off the timeline. Quirrel is the DADA professor, Snape asks the same questions he did in the first book and picked on Fred and George Weasley the same he did toward Ron.
This novel is good for passing time when there’s nothing else to read. There is a difference between being a good writer, and writing something that is good.
5 years ago
9
Tam132
Author are you ok? Its has been a while since you have updated and I was wondering if you died or just dropped the novel. If you aren't dead please at least leave a chappie with a status update. 0lease and thank you.
Sincerely
Fan
5 years ago
4
Gewess
Good Fanfiction , worth your time to read but no reguler schedule for update ,
and also worth your power stone , keep the good work Author-san
5 years ago
4
DemenDeDestin
This novel is great, don't know if you're doing this for the contest but I hope you keep writing it. It's so well written and enjoyable. Thanks. ♡
5 years ago
4
Bai_yi
Good novel 5 stars
By the way,
If you're interested in a good wizarding world
fanfic, the name is Hogwarts Blood Sorcerer, here's a link:
https://m.qidian.com/book/1016313525
If you decide to give it a go and you find it to
your liking please make me a favor and put a
pickup request on webnovel forum (I don't
know why I cannot post anything myself),
thanks
5 years ago
3
hellomf
I just love this story so much....... Great plotline and mc is good but not too op... And I love the fact that Dumbledore is not shown as some evil powerful old man, I agree that he was old and a little manipulative but then again a person in his position and gone through what he has, leave the old man some incentive.... Although I would love the author to upload more chapters on a daily basis but hey no pressure,m only asking for 1 chapter a day.... Well author keep doing your thing n keep writing and I'll do my thing n keep reading and loving the Novel...... Awaiting next chapter...
5 years ago
3
Unchainedx
This novel is gold !! There are several novels with the HP universe, but this one stands out from the others, it's so good that I'm happy when the author launches new chapters, even though I choose to expect to accumulate more chapters.
The author does not overdo the changes made in the HP universe, the romance MCxFleur is relatively unique and very well written, the romance is not fast, but it is not slow, it's very well written, his interactions with magical beasts is fantastic, the author wrote In a way that a "side story" is so much fun to read, this is a novel that really was worth my time and I will keep waiting for many chapters in the future !, brother never drop this novel, you are very talented and have a diamond in hands.
This is one of the only reviews I was happy to write :)
Many thanks for the chapters and keep up the great work!
Great hug from a brazilian fan
5 years ago
3
streiz
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2 years ago
2
UCHIHA
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4 years ago
2
Sukeerat_Chopra
loved the book waiting for more chapters please realese as soon as possible 😁✌️✌️👍👍👍👍👍👍✌️✌️✌️✌️✌️✌️✌️✌️✌️✌️✌️✌️✌️✌️✌️✌️✌️✌️✌️✌️✌️✌️✌️✌️✌️
This is great and very interesting. It shows the HP universe we all know and love in a new and fresh view of it. The MC is smart and is likable. The way he acts and gets his motivation is understandable and doesnt have the hero disease and stupidity of Harry and Ron (no offense but just my opinion). Overall this is a great fanfic that I think I'll be enjoying for a while! So keep it up author and keep pumping out those chapter hahaha
Best Harry Potter fanfic ever!!! 🤗😍😇 Best Harry Potter fanfic ever!!! 🤗😍😇 Best Harry Potter fanfic ever!!! 🤗😍😇 Best Harry Potter fanfic ever!!! 🤗😍😇 Best Harry Potter fanfic ever!!! 🤗😍😇 Best Harry Potter fanfic ever!!! 🤗😍😇 Best Harry Potter fanfic ever!!! 🤗😍😇 Best Harry Potter fanfic ever!!! 🤗😍😇 Best Harry Potter fanfic ever!!! 🤗😍😇 Best Harry Potter fanfic ever!!! 🤗😍😇 Best Harry Potter fanfic ever!!! 🤗😍😇 Best Harry Potter fanfic ever!!! 🤗😍😇 Best Harry Potter fanfic ever!!! 🤗😍😇 Best Harry Potter fanfic ever!!! 🤗😍😇 Best Harry Potter fanfic ever!!! 🤗😍😇 Best Harry Potter fanfic ever!!! 🤗😍😇
Well basically what is said in introduction of story is quite a lie, he isn't seeking revenge or seeking power for that by any means. After his family was killed, he got adopted by muggles and yeah, he consider them more of real parents than his dead ones, even refuses to live with blood relative and choses random strangers hause. As expected of such good boy he's sorted to most stupid hause of Griffindor, making friends and showing his full talent for every teacher to see, even though they will probably use him as tool or make him one of them 'mega pus.sy light justice mage' or something between the lines. So yeah revenge ain't boiling in his blood, he don't hide his secrets like his talent even though he can stay low and secretary learn more knowledge and use other more evil/darker ways to get powerful. Basically same lucky pus.sy like Harry himself, but author make him look all smart. So yeah, if you expected that Mc goes for revenge by any means that's a wrong story for you
Very very good I'd say a 9.5/10 Turmoil at the front Wilhelm's forces in the hunt There's a thunder in the east It's an attack of the deceased They've been facing poison gas 7000 charge en masse Turn the tide of the attack And force the enemy to turn back And that's when The dead men Are marching again Osowiec then and again Attack of the dead, hundred men Facing the led once again Hundred men charge again die again Osowiec then and again Attack of the dead, hundred men Facing the led once again Hundred men charge again die again Two combatants spar Hindenburg against the Tsar Move in 12 battalions large Into Russian counter-charge They'll be fighting for their lives As their enemy revives Russian won't surrender, no Striking fear into their foe And that's when The dead men Are marching again Osowiec then and again Attack of the dead, hundred men Facing the led once again Hundred men charge again die again Osowiec then and again Attack of the dead, hundred men Facing the led once again Hundred men charge again die again
The best hp fanfic in this website! Regular update ! Vengeance plot! Thank you author!--------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------
Not a bad fan fiction, but far from good. The writing quality is excellent, only some occasional typos, but at least the author knows how to write literature unlike many others. The story itself on the other end is completely opposite. It severely lacks imagination, and is nothing exciting. The story is exceptionally fast paced, which I don’t mind too much after reading so many hp fanfics, but it’s dull. It simply glosses over everything with “this happened, then that happened, later that happened” scrolling through the entire first year of hogwarts in about 6 chapters. Characters are lacking depth and other than the occasional “wow” towards the mc who is honestly equally boring, they simply have nothing going for them. They are just there to fill in the blanks on what is less of a story and more a summary. The first year of the mc, who is in Fred and George’s year, is simply a ripoff of the first book, which is a couple years off the timeline. Quirrel is the DADA professor, Snape asks the same questions he did in the first book and picked on Fred and George Weasley the same he did toward Ron. This novel is good for passing time when there’s nothing else to read. There is a difference between being a good writer, and writing something that is good.
Author are you ok? Its has been a while since you have updated and I was wondering if you died or just dropped the novel. If you aren't dead please at least leave a chappie with a status update. 0lease and thank you. Sincerely Fan
Good Fanfiction , worth your time to read but no reguler schedule for update , and also worth your power stone , keep the good work Author-san
This novel is great, don't know if you're doing this for the contest but I hope you keep writing it. It's so well written and enjoyable. Thanks. ♡
Good novel 5 stars By the way, If you're interested in a good wizarding world fanfic, the name is Hogwarts Blood Sorcerer, here's a link: https://m.qidian.com/book/1016313525 If you decide to give it a go and you find it to your liking please make me a favor and put a pickup request on webnovel forum (I don't know why I cannot post anything myself), thanks
I just love this story so much....... Great plotline and mc is good but not too op... And I love the fact that Dumbledore is not shown as some evil powerful old man, I agree that he was old and a little manipulative but then again a person in his position and gone through what he has, leave the old man some incentive.... Although I would love the author to upload more chapters on a daily basis but hey no pressure,m only asking for 1 chapter a day.... Well author keep doing your thing n keep writing and I'll do my thing n keep reading and loving the Novel...... Awaiting next chapter...
This novel is gold !! There are several novels with the HP universe, but this one stands out from the others, it's so good that I'm happy when the author launches new chapters, even though I choose to expect to accumulate more chapters. The author does not overdo the changes made in the HP universe, the romance MCxFleur is relatively unique and very well written, the romance is not fast, but it is not slow, it's very well written, his interactions with magical beasts is fantastic, the author wrote In a way that a "side story" is so much fun to read, this is a novel that really was worth my time and I will keep waiting for many chapters in the future !, brother never drop this novel, you are very talented and have a diamond in hands. This is one of the only reviews I was happy to write :) Many thanks for the chapters and keep up the great work! Great hug from a brazilian fan
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loved the book waiting for more chapters please realese as soon as possible 😁✌️✌️👍👍👍👍👍👍✌️✌️✌️✌️✌️✌️✌️✌️✌️✌️✌️✌️✌️✌️✌️✌️✌️✌️✌️✌️✌️✌️✌️✌️✌️