[HIATUS] Undercover Superstar : A Song of Pyros and Snowflakes

Hello! I’m the writer of this novel! <3 I’ll shamelessly give it 4.8 stars ⭐️, the only thing lacking being my updating stability as writing isn’t exactly my main job. I’ll still do my best! A little background on my novel, I actually wrote it almost 10 years ago on a different site when I just finished high school. Never got to finish it due to University and responsibilities. But now that I’m a somewhat stable adult, it’s time to finish my baby! If you’ve read my novel before, with a slightly different name, you’ll realize that I’ve changed a lot and really worked hard on polishing my previous immature writing. Especially when I looked back on it and realized how horrible a writer I was. 😅 Now a little bit on the story. I’ve read a numerous amount of novels of every genre on Webnovel, WxiaWrld, Volarenvls, etc. When it comes to romance, they’re mostly centered around CEOs. The cold ceo, ruthless ceo, doting ceo and all that. I admit it is really enjoyable. But it always bothers me how these men turn out that way. There aren’t enough normal guys out there. Hahaha. My main male character isn’t exactly normal either but he is human. I try my best to make my characters have reasons for why they act a certain way or turn out a certain way. Li Tian is just used to acting the way he wants. He isn’t a cold or ruthless person. Just an arrogant and slightly immature teenager. It’s a fun ride seeing him change into a man. My main female character is definitely the star of the story. In fact she’s very different than your stereotypical main lead. She has no thirst for revenge, no hate on her, is not naive, not stupid (except in math), no bloodthirsty siblings or anything negative about her (mostly). Rather, she’s quite perfect. But what’s so fun about a perfect main character? Hahaha. That’s where the story comes in. Give the story a try. I’ll do my best to satisfy. I have the whole story in my mind. I just need to get the time to write it down. Story wise, I’m not too worried.. I just want people to enjoy it 😊 Please feel free to correct mistakes. Your Snowflake, Azzack

This novel got a well written plot that would have anyone craving for more which is a rare feeling such as nowadays the synopsis of most of the novels are becoming more similar to one another that could get boring as time passes by. This novel will give you a refreshing taste that you would literally ask for more. Please continue this as soon as possible author-nim!! Gosh, I think I have fallen for the characters.😄☺️

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The synopsis of the novel managed to catch my attention, and as for the storyline, it is something I would usually go for. I had a pleasant time reading this, and waiting for more chapters in the future!

The plot and development are amazing, your grammar is fine, overall your story is great, but, it could grow. Just keep on working hard and you'll be all right. (Sorry if my review was sucky.)

This is a promising romance story, it got better as I progressed and piqued my interest. The leads are good with potential to grow. It can only improve with editing and the author seems to have the creativity to keep things interesting going further.

My review concerns the two first chapter. First i precise that this kind of story isn't my cup of tea, but i have tried to read quite a few of them as the english vocabulary for dialogs, emotions and so on is often far better. They are good content to improve myself. The grammar is very good, i didn't see any glaring mistakes except for a few typos and there is a nice flow. I think people appreciating this genre will enjoy this story with no problem. The first chapter is impactful enough and directly set the mood. Romance, Female MC, highschool, if that is what you're looking for, you don't need to hesitate anymore. Not much world-building to talk about in two chapters only, so for now it is a full mark.

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First of all, this is not my cup of tea, but I'll try to not let my preferences hinder my review, hehe. The romance in here is something that will easily pique your interest and If you're somewhat a romantic person, I will recommend this to you. The story moves at a pace easy to dive in and remember, good job on that, characters are portrayed so nicely and I learned something on that part, thank you very much. There are grammatical errors here and there but nah, It's really an unavoidable thing for us, writers. Keep up the good work