The Water Body Refinement Adept

An amazing story much better quality then some of the crap here. The horror of finding out you reached the last chapter sucks. Plz keep going and dont drop for the love of god too many have been droped recently

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I am happy to see a story appear on this site with a setting similar to Age of Adepts and WMW, so I’ve decided to do my best to review it and maybe help the author steer clear of some of the pitfalls Age of Adepts fell to. The main character being a Water Body Refining Adept is a new and novel idea, please stick to it. In later chapters we can already see the main character going down the same path as the Mc in age of adepts, in that he is trying his hand at making golems. Please, pleeeeaaaassse, don’t make this a story about the main character stomping his way through all obstacles in his path with an army of golems that he didn’t even really have to work for. That undermines the entire point of this story being about a Water Body Refining Adept. Using and making golems is fine, but I would recommend some hefty limitations or time investments to make it so he has to primarily rely on his own efforts. For example, you could make it so using golems at an adept level of combat requires all of your focus to control the golem. This would allow golem centered adepts to still exist, while preventing Drodosis from cheating his way through every battle by using an army of golems to win. I’d also recommend making it ridiculously difficult and expensive to make even a single golem at the adept level, that way he’ll have to be careful using them and not just throw them at his problems. If this were a story about a golem adept, I wouldn’t be nearly as concerned, but lately almost all of the focus has been devoted to Knight training and golem making. He has made pitiful progress on his path as a Water Body Refining Adept in comparison to all the results he’s seen along the other paths, mainly because he hasn’t been devoting his time to his original goal and keeps getting distracted by all these side projects. He hasn’t even asked for Blackwater as a reward yet, despite it being required for the only water body refining spell he knows of. Writing quality is mostly good, though I would recommend checking your usage of the word “expensive”. You keep writing it as “expansive” instead, and they are two different words with two entirely different meanings. Besides that, just be on the look out for spelling and grammar errors and improve as you go along. I have already noticed some improvement along this front in later chapters. As far as character development for Drodosis goes... I’m happy with it, ultimately it could be better but it’s more than I was expecting. He isn’t just a murder-happy cold Adept with no moral principle, instead we see that he values friendship and loyalty and has a few vices (such as his desire to be praised). I hope we see him try and work towards his family gaining a set of morals too, and maybe see him getting some personal attachments of his own to a few of the side characters to humanize him a bit. Anyways, good start to the novel and I hope to see much more in the future!

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Good biochip fantasy novels are rare. Hope author completes this novel. Thanks for writing this novel. Hope this gets more popular. Still not reached 140 characters.

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This quite good. It makes me think of WmW or Age of adepts. Bruh...i need to write 140 characters hahahahhahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahah

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Great story, not too fast not too slow, not overpowered mc. This story just makes me wish I found this story later so that more chapters were available for me to read at one time. I binged this story in 6 hours really good. Please keep the story rolling.

Muito bom, a historia me lembra "age of adepts", continue com seu otimo trabalho , a historia esta indo na velocidade certa e com um enredo ate agora confiavel👍👍👏👏😀😀

Love the main character and the magic system really good Love the main character and the magic system really good Love the main character and the magic system really good Love the main character and the magic system really good Love the main character and the magic system really good

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If you just want to waste time this is the book for you. There isn't a story, the main character is dumb and there is no world background. Quality if writing and update stability are five. Well maybe four for writing quality.