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I am Bryan Colt, a High School student at the University of Science and Technology.
"Ahh~ my monthly allowance got delayed again, how could I live for the upcoming weeks?" (Bryan) says in dissatisfaction.
Suddenly he receives a spam text message,
"Hello, Good day sir, are you short in money? then come to our office, near to the city mall, the food techies, the only thing you needed to do is taste a sample of our new product and conduct a survey"
What Is this? a new type of scam? Hmm near at the city mall huh, my apartment was near into that place, It won't hurt to check it out.
At that time I should've stopped myself coming into that place...
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This is a review of the first two chapters. The main character, Bryan, wanted to make some quick pocket-money. He decided to taste test food at a shady company. Instead of a quick money generating job, he ended up becoming attached to a sociopathic system. Bryan’s quiet days are over. There are some grammatical issues. Most of the problems are from using the wrong word: sour used instead of sore. There are also some sentences that don’t make sense. Overall, these errors don’t effect your ability to follow the plot.