Wrath of The Dragon Slayer

This is Brandon gould the Writer of the book Demonsong, I have read all of the chapters of your book that are out so far. I will give it a review and if you don't mind reviewing my book Demonsong I will say that this is a very unique premise and I enjoyed reading it, the MC seems interesting and I am invested in the plot, I would like to see him go though some sort of Character arc thought the story, like realize that killing is not always the right way or something of that route to where you could tie it back to the death of his family. I like the writing it is good and I liked reading it There is one problem. While reading it because of the way you put your diolge without any indication of who is talking made me confused and there was parts there just details when a person could have said it as well. These are suggestions