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Jing Mo Chen fell in love at first smell when he smelt Mu Xi Xing's scent

Jing Mo Chen: Youngest General in the
Military, God-like figure in the business world

Mu Xi Xing fell in love at first sight when she looked into Jing Mo Chen's eyes

Mu Xi Xing: Pervert-like genius, Incredible senses

How did the two of them meet and how would their love story be like?

Mu Xi Xing only wanted to find her birth parents but ended up finding a whole lot more conspiracy.

Jing Mo Chen helped her along the way and the two of them helped others.

What else would they find out and what would they get at the end?


Honest Reviews:

"The development is very happy-go-lucky to me. There is not much depth to situations or conversations and a lot of things are just placed in peoples laps. A lot of the wording of the sentences sounds basic with not much description- like it is what it is because I said so i.e. 'the cat felt sad because the cat felt sad' or the situation goes the way i want it to or people react in a positive way or negative way but not much in between." 

"Picked up this little gem recently. Spent about 5 hours reading continuously to catch up. Great book, great character design, great everything. There are a few hiccups with the grammar and vocabulary but there is significant improvements in each chapter.
The author never fails to entertain. Keep up the good work author."


Disclosure:

Most readers that don't like this story falls into the following two categories:

1. Grammar mistakes 
2. Illogical

Most readers that love this story falls into the following two categories:

1. Alpha male and female lead with their love for one another
2. A new type of story


There are good and bad reviews. So, it is up to you to decide.

Sweet Military Marriage: Mr. Jing, Please Spare Me!

<p>"The doctor said that if you were to have sex, your heart might not be able to take it and you would increase the risk of dying faster! Let alone have a child! Our whole family knows about it! Brother was afraid that you would be sad about it, so he told us not to let you know! Do you know how much my brother loves to have a child? But because he loves you so much, he doesn't want to make you sad. He kept it all within himself and this is what he gets in return?! Since you betrayed my brother, don't expect us to let you off so easily!"</p>

<p>"What… No… That's not true!" Ling Jing Yi's face turned pale because she realized that what Huo Meng Li said might be true. She always wondered why her heartbeats felt a little abnormal and especially each time after having intercourse with Hai Long, her heart would be in pain for a while.</p>

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