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Jing Mo Chen fell in love at first smell when he smelt Mu Xi Xing's scent

Jing Mo Chen: Youngest General in the
Military, God-like figure in the business world

Mu Xi Xing fell in love at first sight when she looked into Jing Mo Chen's eyes

Mu Xi Xing: Pervert-like genius, Incredible senses

How did the two of them meet and how would their love story be like?

Mu Xi Xing only wanted to find her birth parents but ended up finding a whole lot more conspiracy.

Jing Mo Chen helped her along the way and the two of them helped others.

What else would they find out and what would they get at the end?


Honest Reviews:

"The development is very happy-go-lucky to me. There is not much depth to situations or conversations and a lot of things are just placed in peoples laps. A lot of the wording of the sentences sounds basic with not much description- like it is what it is because I said so i.e. 'the cat felt sad because the cat felt sad' or the situation goes the way i want it to or people react in a positive way or negative way but not much in between." 

"Picked up this little gem recently. Spent about 5 hours reading continuously to catch up. Great book, great character design, great everything. There are a few hiccups with the grammar and vocabulary but there is significant improvements in each chapter.
The author never fails to entertain. Keep up the good work author."


Disclosure:

Most readers that don't like this story falls into the following two categories:

1. Grammar mistakes 
2. Illogical

Most readers that love this story falls into the following two categories:

1. Alpha male and female lead with their love for one another
2. A new type of story


There are good and bad reviews. So, it is up to you to decide.

Sweet Military Marriage: Mr. Jing, Please Spare Me!

Qi Xiao Hui was very wary because she remembered that she and her team was catching a group of underworld group that was dealing with drugs but ended up being trapped. Later, when she and her team were almost at their wit's end, a group of people appeared and saved them. Whatever that happened later, she doesn't know because she had lost her consciousness from losing too much blood.

"Mo Xi. Hospital. You lost consciousness."

Mo Xi kept it simple since Qi Xiao Hui was very on guard, there was no point saying too much because the more she said the more Qi Xiao Hui would be on guard.

Qi Xiao Hui looked at Mo Xi and realized that she was wearing the doctor's coat so she thought that Mo Xi must be the doctor.

Qi Xiao Hui sat up and she hissed because her whole body was in pain.

Mo Xi's eyebrows scrunched up and she moved forward and pressed the button to raise the bed, "Don't move about too much or too fast. Your wound would open up again."

Take Away Your Innocence