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Jing Mo Chen fell in love at first smell when he smelt Mu Xi Xing's scent

Jing Mo Chen: Youngest General in the
Military, God-like figure in the business world

Mu Xi Xing fell in love at first sight when she looked into Jing Mo Chen's eyes

Mu Xi Xing: Pervert-like genius, Incredible senses

How did the two of them meet and how would their love story be like?

Mu Xi Xing only wanted to find her birth parents but ended up finding a whole lot more conspiracy.

Jing Mo Chen helped her along the way and the two of them helped others.

What else would they find out and what would they get at the end?


Honest Reviews:

"The development is very happy-go-lucky to me. There is not much depth to situations or conversations and a lot of things are just placed in peoples laps. A lot of the wording of the sentences sounds basic with not much description- like it is what it is because I said so i.e. 'the cat felt sad because the cat felt sad' or the situation goes the way i want it to or people react in a positive way or negative way but not much in between." 

"Picked up this little gem recently. Spent about 5 hours reading continuously to catch up. Great book, great character design, great everything. There are a few hiccups with the grammar and vocabulary but there is significant improvements in each chapter.
The author never fails to entertain. Keep up the good work author."


Disclosure:

Most readers that don't like this story falls into the following two categories:

1. Grammar mistakes 
2. Illogical

Most readers that love this story falls into the following two categories:

1. Alpha male and female lead with their love for one another
2. A new type of story


There are good and bad reviews. So, it is up to you to decide.

Sweet Military Marriage: Mr. Jing, Please Spare Me!

Shen Feng Xing entered Xiao Rong Yao's wardroom, and he found that Shen Yu Rou and Song Qiao had dozed off while they were waiting for Xiao Rong Yao to wake up.

"Grandmother. Little Rou. Wake up."

Shen Feng Xing called out softly as though he was afraid that he would frighten them if he were any louder.

"Brother Feng Xing?" Shen Yu Rou woke up in a blur when she heard Shen Feng Xing's voice, and her face was filled with tiredness as she hadn't slept well for days.

"Feng Xing?" Song Qiao woke up as well, and she looked no better than Shen Yu Rou.

"I will stay here to take care of grandfather. You all should go back home to have your dinner and freshen up. I have already prepared dinner at home, just warm it up when you all are going to eat."

"Grandmother is alright. Feng Xing, you have been running here and there these few days, and you have always been the one doing the night watch, you would be more tired than us…"

Wishes