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Jing Mo Chen fell in love at first smell when he smelt Mu Xi Xing's scent

Jing Mo Chen: Youngest General in the
Military, God-like figure in the business world

Mu Xi Xing fell in love at first sight when she looked into Jing Mo Chen's eyes

Mu Xi Xing: Pervert-like genius, Incredible senses

How did the two of them meet and how would their love story be like?

Mu Xi Xing only wanted to find her birth parents but ended up finding a whole lot more conspiracy.

Jing Mo Chen helped her along the way and the two of them helped others.

What else would they find out and what would they get at the end?


Honest Reviews:

"The development is very happy-go-lucky to me. There is not much depth to situations or conversations and a lot of things are just placed in peoples laps. A lot of the wording of the sentences sounds basic with not much description- like it is what it is because I said so i.e. 'the cat felt sad because the cat felt sad' or the situation goes the way i want it to or people react in a positive way or negative way but not much in between." 

"Picked up this little gem recently. Spent about 5 hours reading continuously to catch up. Great book, great character design, great everything. There are a few hiccups with the grammar and vocabulary but there is significant improvements in each chapter.
The author never fails to entertain. Keep up the good work author."


Disclosure:

Most readers that don't like this story falls into the following two categories:

1. Grammar mistakes 
2. Illogical

Most readers that love this story falls into the following two categories:

1. Alpha male and female lead with their love for one another
2. A new type of story


There are good and bad reviews. So, it is up to you to decide.

Sweet Military Marriage: Mr. Jing, Please Spare Me!

Most mother would put all their attention on their children, but Mo Xi didn't. Instead, she was out often and didn't spend as much time as she should have with them. Hence, she was guilty, and that's why she blamed herself for being irresponsible. She also felt guilty because the babies couldn't spend more time with their father or their grandparents and could only stay in the hotel. It was as though she was preventing them from showing their love for the babies when they could have been loved by so many people around them.

Jing Mo Xing and Jing Chen Xi looked at Mo Xi and Jing Mo Chen with their big round eyes and smiled sweetly.

As though they understood what Mo Xi was saying, their hands reached out to touch Mo Xi's face and tried to calm her. Two small hands, one on each side of Mo Xi's face.

Mo Xi's heart melted because of their actions. Her eyes were filled with tears instantly, and a drop of tear rolled down while she tried to smile.

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