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Jing Mo Chen fell in love at first smell when he smelt Mu Xi Xing's scent

Jing Mo Chen: Youngest General in the
Military, God-like figure in the business world

Mu Xi Xing fell in love at first sight when she looked into Jing Mo Chen's eyes

Mu Xi Xing: Pervert-like genius, Incredible senses

How did the two of them meet and how would their love story be like?

Mu Xi Xing only wanted to find her birth parents but ended up finding a whole lot more conspiracy.

Jing Mo Chen helped her along the way and the two of them helped others.

What else would they find out and what would they get at the end?


Honest Reviews:

"The development is very happy-go-lucky to me. There is not much depth to situations or conversations and a lot of things are just placed in peoples laps. A lot of the wording of the sentences sounds basic with not much description- like it is what it is because I said so i.e. 'the cat felt sad because the cat felt sad' or the situation goes the way i want it to or people react in a positive way or negative way but not much in between." 

"Picked up this little gem recently. Spent about 5 hours reading continuously to catch up. Great book, great character design, great everything. There are a few hiccups with the grammar and vocabulary but there is significant improvements in each chapter.
The author never fails to entertain. Keep up the good work author."


Disclosure:

Most readers that don't like this story falls into the following two categories:

1. Grammar mistakes 
2. Illogical

Most readers that love this story falls into the following two categories:

1. Alpha male and female lead with their love for one another
2. A new type of story


There are good and bad reviews. So, it is up to you to decide.

Sweet Military Marriage: Mr. Jing, Please Spare Me!

Ru Hui Ya held onto Jing Mo Chen's hands as she spoke softly. It was as though she was upset about whatever that had happened, but she was still trying to comfort him.

Jing Mo Chen then looked down as though he was saddened by Ru Hui Ya's words, but it was actually to hide his anger.

One thing that Jing Mo Chen could never stand was to hear anything, especially negative comments about Mo Xi from Ru Hui Ya's mouth.

Ru Hui Ya then held onto Jing Mo Chen's face, "Look at me. Everything will be alright, ok?"

Jing Mo Chen held onto Ru Hui Ya's hand as he smiled, "Ok."

Jing Mo Chen's action looked as though he was trying to hold Ru Hui Ya's hand, but it was actually to remove her hand from his face.

Ru Hui Ya then proceeded to hug Jing Mo Chen's body, "It's so nice to be able to hold you like this… But I won't be able to hold you like this for a while…"

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