Love this and think you did an amazing job 🥰😍😍😌😌 please write another chapter and don’t leave me an a cliffhanger please finish it!🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺
5 years ago
2
Shikha_Bharti_9824
This is wrong bts members are not gay and portraying them at that may damage their reputation. You should certainly choose some other perspective of writing about them like friendship and there hard work to success.
4 years ago
1
Minya_Blain
The set up is not there the intro of different characters is non existent i can soare grammatical errorS but starting a story without a context is not gonna keep any attention from readers; can’t even care about the characters cause we readers are not invested in them
Love this and think you did an amazing job 🥰😍😍😌😌 please write another chapter and don’t leave me an a cliffhanger please finish it!🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺
This is wrong bts members are not gay and portraying them at that may damage their reputation. You should certainly choose some other perspective of writing about them like friendship and there hard work to success.
The set up is not there the intro of different characters is non existent i can soare grammatical errorS but starting a story without a context is not gonna keep any attention from readers; can’t even care about the characters cause we readers are not invested in them