Daily life of Mio
Author: Sp_Ace
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What happens when the Queen of Success, and the King of Stupidity end up having...Well an unexpected romance? Will it end up in flames? or will the two be better together?
Author's Note: It's all short stories, mainly because this is my first piece of work
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Ah...a new writer. This is very great, I'm sure you'll become better the longer and more you write. And so far this first chapter...it's good. But some tips I'd give you would be to maybe focus on grammar and description. I think that's what makes a book pop. But good luck little one. I'll try and stay here for the journey.
seems fun :3 :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D
It has a lot of potential i think The way of writing looks good for the first thing you ever wrote and i like it so far but i just wish it was worded a bit better so that it has more personality but its good overall