An Elf in Harry Potter

Hey ! this is liaison, an editor from Stary.ltd. I just read your book .I love it so much If you wanted to see whether you can get paid by distributing the current work or getting financial support by writing new work, you might want to contact liaison-@outlook.com or yxli94@foxmail.com. A brief introduction, some sample chapters or links will be appreciated when reaching out.

The storyline is great along with the plot but the grammar and punctuation is pretty bad. The storyline and plot support each other and you are not being confusing but the grammar and punctuation make the story hard to understand as it mess’ with how easy it is to read. I would proof read a couple of times to make sure it is ok and flows nicely