Im just writing this as a prototype for an assignment sInce I don't really know how to write a story.
Warning tho, this is all on the spot. I haven't done any research or whatsoever, so mind me if it lacks any form of foundation.
i cringed while rereading it. i guess it works as an assignment.
kill me pls.
Story very well laid though short but also interesting......though every very slow development quicken it pleaaaaasseee.................... . .
The author rushed to conclusions, no suspense nor fiction and killing the female's lead earlier..... just left wondering whether there's more development left after this.......