[BL] Quick Transmigration: Is it Better to be a Beta?

[BL] Quick Transmigration: Is it Better to be a Beta?

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Author: LittleBlueLake
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Jia Hyson finds he has hit the jackpot after he dies.



He's got a system! He's a transmigrator! So cool!



System: "Please help us fix the plot."



Jia Hyson: "Of course!"



System: "Firstly there are too many love interests."



Jia Hyson: "Okay."



System: "The main character is too annoying."



Jia Hyson: "Um."



System: "Needs more world building."



Jia Hyson: "..."



Oi, is he fixing the plot or is he rewriting the whole damn thing?!



(This is not omegaverse, beta stands for beta reader)



(This is bl/yaoi/danmei btw. 1v1, 2v1, 3+v1)



Lovely Cover by my fanart empress @noc

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Suzami
Suzami

This is the first book i've ever given a review on WN, and also the first i've given two of(。•ω•。)ノ♡ honestly, the writing skills of little blue is just pure gold, from her comedic timing, to her swift hands coming behind you to pierce you in the chest with a load of agony and pain, to her creativity and imagination to form plot twist and give a variety of events and interactions that make you feel the world being built around them, or at the very least feel as though the most of side characters have life in them, where they have differing personalities and charm. Hah...The duality of being a reader, i dont know how many tears i shed over the current arc(arc 4) and laughed till i was rolling on the floor from laughter. Theres also that versatility and uniqueness, where you feel as though you can never fully predict who will be the next shard, or what will happen to a detailed extent, yet theres foreshadowing here and there, in which tbh im too shallow to pick up most of the time:,3 Da Gong is still best boi, and best male lead DONATE KOFI TO THE DEAR AUTHOR IF YA CAN\(◎o◎)/(yes ik im shameless:P) Thank you little blue for all the effort and time you've placed into your book, ily, also looking forward to the next arc, and new readers scoping out if this is a good book, heads up there'll be a very shameless and sl*g, spicy chicken host waiting for you~ ;3

3 years ago
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Laughing_Stork
Laughing_Stork

I've been reading this for a long time now and reread it several times already. Everything about this book is very unique, every arc, every character, every plot, just everything. The info dumps and monologues are not boring at all. Jia is very funny and has a very peculiar mindset. Although he has a very twisted three views, at least he still had them. I love every aspect of the story. Author is very ingenious and open minded. I love you so much ♡⁠(⁠>⁠ ⁠ਊ⁠ ⁠<⁠)⁠♡.

a year ago
7
That_Little_Prince
That_Little_Prince

I've just learned that I have spent over 24 hours reading this story.....and it's 100 percent worth the time investment!! This story is quite literally ABOUT creating interesting world backgrounds without plot holes, the author accomplishes this goal in every world. The update stability is about once a month but every chapter is thousands, if not TENS of thousands of words long... Well worth the wait. When it comes to Character Design Jia Hyson is an absolutely beautiful example of it. The other characters are great as well but as he's the main character and we spend the most time with him I'll sing his praises in this review. He has a developed personality with defined traits but he has more depth to him than you'd expect and the author never lets him stagnate and become boring! This is also due to the great concept of the story. Speaking of that, the story development is also fantastic. I feel that the pacing is top tier. The author is a master at making the mundane entertaining and the slice of life lively. But they are versatile because the tense moments do what they're meant to do and get you excited and on the edge of your seat in anticipation. The writing quality is always great, completely understandable at all times. The explanation of unfamiliar concepts is very endearing to me, the narration similar to a friend telling you a story after not seeing each other for awhile. If it isn't obvious yet I love this story. I don't like to give reviews before a book is completed but I wouldn't be upset even if I had to follow this story for the rest of my life. I also don't think many things are deserving of a full score. For me and my taste? This story is definitely deserving. (Sorry for the essay but seriously, just read this.)

9 months ago
6
TheBluePeanut
TheBluePeanut

I fell in love with this webnovel. The writing style is to die for and the system's personality is adorable. (AND it's a good BL <3) Definitely bookmarking this one !

5 years ago
77
Hanvaler
Hanvaler

This story is trully a hidden gem! Good grammar, amazing writing, a captivating and funny plot, not to mention the charming MC and system (who are always bickering). Definetely worth the read (don't be fooled by it only having 10 chapters so far! Every chapter is actually quite long).

5 years ago
53
Suzami
Suzami

This is an excellent novel that contrasts from the norm of transmigration stories. The protagonist(JH), who’s personality i absolutely love, is someone who is *very* shameless and isn’t afraid of doing what he wants. He doesn’t force himself to like others either, which includes the gongs, (to conclude he is, as the novel says, a spicy chicken), making the story feel more natural and realistic.Thus, you can throw away any expectations of love at first sight, since this is NOT one of those qt that has the mc/ml like the mc/ml because of a *special magical feeling* or because they acted like and are thus the ml from the previous world. Next, with the fantastic writing, one can easily be absorbed into the story and have a vivid imagination of each character. The comedy is especially up my isle, such as JH being willing to tease to the extreme, and the conversations between JH and Bebe. I find the concept to be unique too, since JH isn’t transmigration to act as someone, nor is he transmigration to fufill the wishes of others, but to improve the story by being part of it and so on. The gong is great too, since each part has a different personality and could be anyone, which, at this point, I just think of them as different people But since I’m biased, my all time favourite gong is *spoilers on the gongs* Da gong,100%, can’t change my mind.A sweet, loyal, loving, epic, powerful rooster with the cherry on top of being a tsundere, i can’t think of anything that could top that. The only critism i can give is that sometimes the story feels a little draggy, but besides that i have nothing to complain. To sum things up, great writing, comedy, characters, and definitely a top-notch novel worth spending time reading

3 years ago
47
MiMz
MiMz

A diamond in the rough a great read. I was a little sceptical in reading this cause I didn't know what I was getting into but I'm really glad I didn't pass it up. Love MC and MC's system BeBe they are comedy together.

5 years ago
43
Leighton_Kozak
Leighton_Kozak

honestly the best novel in bl drama i have read on this site by far. does contain more ***** themes but that allows the author to write more intereresting arcs without rehashing the same old cliches over and over. you could easily skip the steamy scenes if you felt uncomfortable and still enjoy the plot. but admit it, most of us enjoy some good smut :p seriously though this story is better than many books i have read that you buy. donating to the author in support which i rarey do (due to lack of funds) but worth it here to motivate and support our lovely author!

4 years ago
40
OppressedBeans
OppressedBeans

Deserving of five stars, this is probably the best BL novel I’ve ever read, hands down!! The character is open and very diverse and isn’t an idiot which is really a breath of fresh air. He doesnt get too caught up in the past but still cares and is very respectful. The character supports lots of things but nothing like murder and other horrible things. Honestly I’ve read till chapter 110 for the past three days straight, im only going to pause there because im getting a slight migraine from using my brain so much and not because im sick of the story just because i think i got a little too excited from how much i love this story. Please if you dont like this theres something wrong with you. (^~^) da best

3 years ago
34
TheGeniuses
TheGeniuses

So I usually don’t read BLs since I haven’t really had good experience with them. However this novel is a masterpiece. The paragraph comment function was basically made for this novel. Every paragraph of this novel is comedy gold. The protagonist although scummy is the most hilarious protagonist you will ever read of and will you make you fall for the character. So for anyone who is like how I was and is hesitant to give this novel a go - please don’t hesitate this novel will definitely fill you with laughter after you read the interaction between characters especially the protagonist and his system

4 years ago
33
yeti_the_queen
yeti_the_queen

I just finished the latest chapter and I am proud to say that this is literally my favorite novel on this app. I've been reading through the reviews and I haven't seen one bad review. LittleBlueLake, if you see this, I just want you to know that you are such a talented writer. Jia Hyson has such a powerful, flirtatious personality and I love it. Literally my favorite type of bl mc. If you have or plan to make another novel, count on me to read it.

4 years ago
30
PeanutButterJuice
PeanutButterJuice

First, addressing those of you who scroll down to the comments before reading. This book is the most amazing book I've read on this site so far, and you'll quickly find yourself lost in the plot and characters. It's a refreshing take on normal System transmigration novels. The MC has his own unique charm, which is to say he's a hilariously ****ty person. The System also is a great character. Originally, I didn't like interactive Systems with personalities, but Bebe is now an exception. Now, addressing the author. First of all, thank you. Just for this novel, I made an account to vote and donate, because it's simply that good. I am thoroughly addicted. There are little to no flaws in the work, and no plotholes that I can find. Two constructive criticisms. Honestly, even if you don't address these, the novel is still a masterpiece. However, I'm going to say them anyway. My first, and the one I hope you consider the most is changing the title of the novel. BL is already a very restrictive category of novel. Some people purposely avoid it. Even for people that do read BL, or people like me who seek them out, not all of us like the same thing. When I was scrolling through the LGBT+ category, I almost missed out on your story. I read the title, and thought it would be about Alpha Beta Omega mechanics instantly. The only reason I clicked on it was because the synopsis has system on the first line, and my love of system novels countered out my iffiness about ABO, Now, I don't have anything against ABO, and think it's good in small doses in transmigration novels, but I wouldn't read an entire book about it. I think you'll find your readers fit into three categories. Those who read BL indiscriminately, those who read it thinking it was ABO and stuck around because the story was amazing, and those who clicked without thinking about ABO in the first place. ABO is a niche within BL, and personally I dislike it because it reminds me of second-rate werewolf stories from the Wattpad days. You may not even realize that some potential readers are ghosting your story for thinking it as a completely different type of novel. Your novel is brilliant, and I don't want others to ghost it because of ABO to limit it's potential. When I think Beta, I, unfortunately, don't think of a unique, cool system with limitless possibilities and a kickass MC. Another is that the paragraphs are large, and can be hard to read, but this definitely isn't that big of the problem. I only noted it because I have a bad tendancy to skim, and I missed a really funny joke, only picking up on it because some people had commented on it at the end of the chapter. By isolating jokes or certain lines, you create emphasis, and it flows better for comedy and importance. Thank you, author, and keep up the good work!

5 years ago
30
Primus_Munifex
Primus_Munifex

Quick Transmigration is easily the best novel I have read on this site Jia Hyson and his system posses wonderful chemistry and are both highly personable and entertaining characters with the protagonist being an entertainingly debauched and flamboyant with a refreshing sense of morality Bebe the system is largely relegated to the role of comic relief though it is a role which suits them well The overall story is well written with the author skilfully and vividly describing the varied situations Jia Hyson finds himself in choosing interesting and novel (pun entirely intended) the premise of the novel is also an innovative take on the usual system trope as for the individual arcs of the story all are interesting takes on usually trite story-lines and character tropes where through the actions of our intrepid protagonist the circumstances are changed and unplumbed depths are found in the characters often to hilarious or horrifying results in conclusion I would entirely recommend this novel even if I am usually not someone who would partake in BL novels TL;DR. This is an incredibly good novel. Read it. 5/5 Would get traumatised again.

4 years ago
28
Windreader8675
Windreader8675

Well played, very well played. The novel is very good and gets you hook instantly with its humour, plot, chemistry, characters and the emoticons. Through the first arc, you will experience symptoms of hunger, heart warming, and laughter from the way the author describes things. Through the second arc, the horror will get you and awaken your inner 'freeminded' self. The third arc is when it gets...kinky and flamboyant. Each chapter is long and very satisfying. Each arc is unique to its own self. Through plots and humour along with the laughters and tears it will bring, it really is well played. It was hard to keep the humour when writing and getting interesting twists and turns, here and there. As they say, this book is an absolute diamond, definitely one of my favorite bl stories that definitely deserves a reread. And mind you, I don't really reread a book so yeah. I really recommend this although not the night before an exam. Thank you author-sama for creating this novel and sharing with us! \(^~^)/ ❤

4 years ago
28
Sladynche
Sladynche

The story is really, really great. It is written well and funny as heck. The interactions of the host and his system are outragiously good! Its fun and easy to read and the author Updates regularly. Even if you dont like BL, you should still read this book. JUST DO IT! You won't regret it.

4 years ago
27
Em_Ti
Em_Ti

Overall it's an amazing book, like damn, I'm not even trying to be one of those people that rate something five stars or whatever to get like a reward or something, cause like generally this is such a great book. Jai hyson and bebes relationship on its own is comedy gold👌😂 And then you have Jai hyson and his messed up but stupidly hilarious personality and back story, which is just too much😂😭. So I would just like to say thanks for such an awesome book. Loving everything about it. Can't wait for the sefu and Farrell romance 😍

4 years ago
27
Zonnestraal
Zonnestraal

What should I say? This story is amazing on a whole lot of levels. 1. The main character, Jia Hyson. First of all, he likes both men and woman, regardless of age etc. That alone should be enough reason to convince you to read this story. It is so rare to see a character liking both genders! He isn't interested only in the male lead, and that is so refreshing. Second of all, he's a murderer with messed up morals, but he is still professional when needed (if he needs to play a likable character, he keeps to his own settings etc.) and keeps to his own boundaries (granted his boundaries are really flexible). 2. The system, Bebe. Sassy system that clashes with main character? Check. Just love his commentaries. 3. The worlds/mission. Okay, so the whole premise of the story is that Jia needs to make bad stories into good ones. This makes the different worlds kind of cliches, but make no mistake: the worlds are amazing. Jia rewrites them so well. The plots of every world are well worked out, and the author makes something initially boring into something really interesting. You won't regret reading them! 4. The world building. The author really makes an effort to explain how everything works, from system hierarchy, to world consciousness, etc. It's really fleshed out. Okay, there is one point that needs to be known, a warning kind of, before you read this. I've already mentioned Jia is a murderer, with messed up morals etc. When I say that I mean that it's a really important, integral part of the story. It doesn't just gloss over it. I have to especially warn for arc 2 (?) I think, the ghost/horror arc. It gets really specific. You might come out with messed up morals yourself. So if you are sensitive to that kind of the stuff, you might want to skip that arc. But you really get a sense of what the character is like there. It could be I forgot somethings that are amazing about this story, but those are the most important stuff. All in all: It is really worth it! You won't regret it! Here I have some candy for you if you read it... It will definitely be the best experience of your life! The candy I have to offer is really good too.

2 years ago
25