it is very good. i like it but the author should write it fast otherwise i will be bored if it comes slowly. So all the best to the author for this novel
5 years ago
3
HeavenlySun
This novel is god like. So I will give it a good ratting. For real the novel is really good when it involves OP and my favorite characters Naruto, though I'm quite sad we still don't know all his power.
Good story... Badass Naruto... Op Naruto .. just don't stop ...the story has good potential.. I like how he interacts with other characters.. author also had good grasp over personalities of ATG characters
5 years ago
1
Kuuhaku_0801
I really want this story to update. Please update Please update Please update Please update Please update Please update Please update Please update Please update
4 years ago
0
DragoPackMan
I liked the concept,
I liked how Che became normal,
I wanted that adopted daughter character as his wife because how the development gone in these 8 chapters,
I LIKED how MC is OP.
Is this novel dropped???
5 years ago
0
Jackj345
excellent you've outdone yourself you made one of the best fanfics ever keep up the good work and don't stop no matter what the comments say
5 years ago
0
Hentai_Lord
I am really looking forward to where this goes
I enjoyed it a lot keep writing but I hope you bring Yun Che into this and dont ntr him
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5 years ago
0
BiscuitSandwich
Read it and see why its 5 star Read it and see why its 5 star Read it and see why its 5 star Read it and see why its 5 star Read it and see why its 5 star
5 years ago
0
Killerarrow007
Dude make devil emperor his.wfe awesome couple I mean story will have it's development as she confides in Naruto about evil God and falls for him or something
5 years ago
0
RaitonMan
You just started this so I don't know about updates but I like everything else qingyue as a daughter yun che shouldn't be able to get evil god legacy if naruto hid it on this planet and not in realm of the gods
5 years ago
0
matja1
I think that this novel is probably going to be one of the best that I have read as long as you keep working on it and update more chapters --------------------------------------------------but i want Mu Xuanyin as his lover because she is more than 10.000 years old and has strenght and talent to reach true GOD realm..Chu Yuechan is good but if you want to make it believable she has no cance of riching true GOD realm with his help and all the legacies because her comprehension is just not high enough to reach true GOD realm..Mu Xuanyin can reach tat realm with little help from him and he is imortal it is esential tat his woman riches the realm of true GOD as they are basically imortal to..so for me Mu Xuanyin or Shen Xi since she is already Above Divine Master Realm and are not so yung---
Well, since the author already spoken, I will give you my review. But to be honest, I don't really like to write a review where the story is still on its first stage. But I don't want to feel guilty so here you go.
First and foremost, sorry about this not-so-great of a review.
The writing is good. The author can explain the scenes quite clearly so that's a plus. The writing is totally readable so that's also a plus. I don't really see any mistakes, but I can't exactly see mistakes because I, myself don't really have a good grammar to begin with.
From what I see at the Table of Contents in mobile, the Author uploads at least a chapter a day. And because this fan fiction already has 6 chapters, its quite promising. I hope the author can keep this up.
Okay... Story development... its still in its early stages. The Author still laying the foundation for the story and I can't really say anything besides that.
Naruto is the main character for this story. Some of the background story of him in ATG world already explained, and I think there are still more background story that will be revealed later down the story.
As I have stated previously, and stated on the title itself, the world that the author used is Against The Gods. I don't really see a problem in the world that the Author chose and I commend him for changing some stuff in there to fit Naruto better.
Overall, this story is very promising. I hope the Author can continue to write this and not dropping. 'Drop' is a very common word in this website, especially to some of very promising fan fiction that was dropped by its respective authors. I kind of sick of people dropping their obviously good fan fiction so I hope this one didn't.
P.S.: What's with this 'r a p e' that has been going on in ATG community? I don't read the light novel and only read some chapters before actually dropping it because I'm not interested anymore. Can someone please 'enlighten' me?
it is very good. i like it but the author should write it fast otherwise i will be bored if it comes slowly. So all the best to the author for this novel
This novel is god like. So I will give it a good ratting. For real the novel is really good when it involves OP and my favorite characters Naruto, though I'm quite sad we still don't know all his power.
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Good story... Badass Naruto... Op Naruto .. just don't stop ...the story has good potential.. I like how he interacts with other characters.. author also had good grasp over personalities of ATG characters
I really want this story to update. Please update Please update Please update Please update Please update Please update Please update Please update Please update
I liked the concept, I liked how Che became normal, I wanted that adopted daughter character as his wife because how the development gone in these 8 chapters, I LIKED how MC is OP. Is this novel dropped???
excellent you've outdone yourself you made one of the best fanfics ever keep up the good work and don't stop no matter what the comments say
I am really looking forward to where this goes I enjoyed it a lot keep writing but I hope you bring Yun Che into this and dont ntr him .................................................
Read it and see why its 5 star Read it and see why its 5 star Read it and see why its 5 star Read it and see why its 5 star Read it and see why its 5 star
Dude make devil emperor his.wfe awesome couple I mean story will have it's development as she confides in Naruto about evil God and falls for him or something
You just started this so I don't know about updates but I like everything else qingyue as a daughter yun che shouldn't be able to get evil god legacy if naruto hid it on this planet and not in realm of the gods
I think that this novel is probably going to be one of the best that I have read as long as you keep working on it and update more chapters --------------------------------------------------but i want Mu Xuanyin as his lover because she is more than 10.000 years old and has strenght and talent to reach true GOD realm..Chu Yuechan is good but if you want to make it believable she has no cance of riching true GOD realm with his help and all the legacies because her comprehension is just not high enough to reach true GOD realm..Mu Xuanyin can reach tat realm with little help from him and he is imortal it is esential tat his woman riches the realm of true GOD as they are basically imortal to..so for me Mu Xuanyin or Shen Xi since she is already Above Divine Master Realm and are not so yung---
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Well, since the author already spoken, I will give you my review. But to be honest, I don't really like to write a review where the story is still on its first stage. But I don't want to feel guilty so here you go. First and foremost, sorry about this not-so-great of a review. The writing is good. The author can explain the scenes quite clearly so that's a plus. The writing is totally readable so that's also a plus. I don't really see any mistakes, but I can't exactly see mistakes because I, myself don't really have a good grammar to begin with. From what I see at the Table of Contents in mobile, the Author uploads at least a chapter a day. And because this fan fiction already has 6 chapters, its quite promising. I hope the author can keep this up. Okay... Story development... its still in its early stages. The Author still laying the foundation for the story and I can't really say anything besides that. Naruto is the main character for this story. Some of the background story of him in ATG world already explained, and I think there are still more background story that will be revealed later down the story. As I have stated previously, and stated on the title itself, the world that the author used is Against The Gods. I don't really see a problem in the world that the Author chose and I commend him for changing some stuff in there to fit Naruto better. Overall, this story is very promising. I hope the Author can continue to write this and not dropping. 'Drop' is a very common word in this website, especially to some of very promising fan fiction that was dropped by its respective authors. I kind of sick of people dropping their obviously good fan fiction so I hope this one didn't. P.S.: What's with this 'r a p e' that has been going on in ATG community? I don't read the light novel and only read some chapters before actually dropping it because I'm not interested anymore. Can someone please 'enlighten' me?
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