Reincarnation Of Third-rate Swordsman
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A Third-rate swordsman who's living a normal life with his wife when the heaven's suddenly turned his world upside down.
His wife got kidnapped by his mortal enemy and he was killed by his both sworn brother.
However, when he thought that it's already his end.
An unprecedented thing happened.
He found himself back on his little apartment on earth eight years ago before the Transmigration of the Humans to the new world.
Now, with his Knowledge about the new world join Kim Shin how he planned to use it to achieve his goals.
Would he be able to kill his sworn brother after he found their real reasons?
or
Would he be able to easily kill his sworn enemy to achieve his dream vengeance?
(Expect that there will be a lot error. I'm not a pro writer. I just make this for some bored person like me. Okay, don't expect this to be something perfect.
This cover photo is not mine.
Kindly pm me if do you want me to take it down)
Hi Guys! Your shameless author is here. Well, I made this story because I'm fond of vengeance types of genre. And I'm sorry about the errors. I'm not good in english that's why I made a lot errors. Still Thank you guys for all the support. ♡♡♡. I will complete this even if I have only one reader. 😊
It's a good novel with a good scenario, so much space for growth! Don't have a perfect gramatic, but... who am i to have been disapointed by this heheh. Hope this job continues better!
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Well it's kinda interesting.. nice job! I'll wait for more chapter!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! More more more More More More More more More More more Moremore More More More More more More More more Moremore More More More More more More More more More more More More More More more More More more More more More More More More more More More more More more More More More More more More More more More
Gracias por el capítulo ... Tal vez más tarde puedas hacer que tenga una línea de sangre, o un dragón como mascota o monta de batalla ... Jeje
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Untuk seorang yang kembali kemasalalu, Mc memiliki mentalitas yang buruk. Terutama pada bagian dimana Mc banyak omong kosong saat bertarung, bagi mereka yang memiliki banyak pengalaman hidup dan mati, sangat konyol melihat Mc yang melakukan tindakan idiot disaat pertempuran. Bahkan olah raga lari ringan membutuhkan metode pernafasan yang tepat untuk menjaga stamina, tapi Mc sedang dalam pertarungan hidup dan mati tapi malah mengatakan omong kosong ditengah pertempuran, hanya pemula yang akan memiliki banyak pemikiran disaat pertempuran sengit terjadi, dan juga sangat idiot untuk berteriak kepada monster yang belum tentu mengerti bahasa manusia, bahkan jika Mc ingin melakukan provokasi terhadap musuh, pasti ada banyak cara yang lebih efektif terhadap monster. Selain pada bagian aksi yang buruk, bagian lain dalam novel ini cukup klise karena sebagian besar alur cerita didalam novel ini telah digunakan pada beberapa novel lainnya. Dan saya cukup mengerti karena ini novel pertamamu, tapi saya pikir lebih baik untuk memiliki bab yang lebih pendek tapi tidak memiliki banyak kekurangan. Karena semakin banyak kata berarti lebih banyak kemungkinan kesalahan yang akan muncul didalamnya, tapi semakin sederhana sesuatu maka semakin sedikit kemungkinan kesalahan didalamnya. Lagipula ini adalah karya pertamamu, lebih baik mempuat novel dengan lebih sedikit kata tapi tanpa banyak kekurangan didalamnya, daripada novel dengan banyak kata tapi justru menjadi novel yang penuh omong kosong didalamnya.
The Grammer is a bit faulty however the story plot is very well developed. In start it will be boring but as you go further ch 20 you will really understand why this noval is one of the best I have ever read.
A good start to an interesting reincarnation novel :) Although the beginning is worded a bit awkwardly making it hard to read the writing quality has gradually improved with each additional chapter.
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Good novel ..........................................................................................................................................................................
Mre chapters please, cant wait to see what happened.. This will be my next favourite book in my library list. Hope there will be no over do to the mc.