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LOVE THE STORY. ALTHOUGH STARING WAS BIT BORING, STORY DEVELOPED VERY FAST AND VERY GOOD. BUT THERE WAS A LOT OF GRAMMAR MISTAKE,LIKE LOVE THE STORY. ALTHOUGH STARING WAS BIT BORING, STORY DEVELOPED VERY FAST AND VERY GOOD. BUT THERE WAS A LOT OF GRAMMAR MISTAKE,LIKE

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-there are some grammar mistake -i dont have that problem on the novel right now -the mc is not a type of a guy who thinks about his lower body so its a 5 star for that -mc is a hard worker and the type who wont show himself unless he got a problem from somone So i like this type of personality -travelling to other universe is really good -i hope he get some kind of challange so it will be a little bit excited and its more gooder than hiding his strength -this novel have a good potential to become a great novel like the 'divine anime system' just need some fixing on grammar and everything is done