This is ok story to read, but there are few issues that make hard to read. First author, just use brackets when system is speaking, i mean i miss a lot of time when system is speaking because this ! ! Is hard to read. Second please use paragraph, separate them into sections, because reading a huge block of words is hard to tell where you are, i have to re- read couple times. And lastly this story has potential, so just fix up a bit and continue the great work.
This is ok story to read, but there are few issues that make hard to read. First author, just use brackets when system is speaking, i mean i miss a lot of time when system is speaking because this ! ! Is hard to read. Second please use paragraph, separate them into sections, because reading a huge block of words is hard to tell where you are, i have to re- read couple times. And lastly this story has potential, so just fix up a bit and continue the great work.