A Glitch In The System(DC)

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It was good in the beginning and had excellent writing but as the story continued it seemed to get more and more *******ish. The MC has a romance with Wonder Woman that seems cute at first, but then it turns into a cheesy generic love story with cheesy lines that normal people would never say. The MC starts out as a suave gentlemenIt but the more the story progresses he turns into your typical virgin edge lord anime MC. It's so sad because the story has such a unique and intriguing concept but it's potential gets squandered the more chapters get released. This is my personal experience though, you may like it or you may feel the same way that I do😕.

Author here I'm going to rate novel a 4.2 as I don't feel like i truely deserve a 5 right now i hope you take the time to add a reveiw to my novel and like. I thank anyone who supports me as i write this novel thank you.

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Honestly I'm very disappointed in your novel. Its not worth more than half a star but I gave you 1 star because at least you tried it wasn't a good try but you tried none the less.

See this, 👍 this is my thumb before reading this. Now see this, 👎 and this is after i saw something tragic. Dont know why its 5 stars, its like a glitch in the system. (dont take this seriously, this is a joke obviously)

It's alright. The Grammars a bit off need checking although the story is great. ///////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////

trashy trash trash

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Great book good story flow chapter come at a good speed and are ok in length can’t wait for next chapter👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍

Good book but it's literally in speed force way to fast forward and what happened to Amanda wallers man u just forgot but the starting was very fresh and good whit the powers which are like op but still not too op as it takes the mc time from Triassic period to the AD period to become op which very justifiable any way make more chapter of the new one as I have already read this one so 6 ch won't cut it for me to read it make up to 40 chaps plz any way the story as alot of potential which the be squished with a good game plan in mind P S Keep Up The Good Work

Obrigado por nos proporcionar um "não harém" ! Thanks for giving us a "no harem"! Thanks for giving us a "no harem"! Thanks for giving us a "no harem"!

Quite poorly written, needs a dedicated editor but as english is not the authors first language all I can say is it needs improving so scored as a 3.6 total score. Updated at a reasonable speed. Story could use more fleshing out and characters are poorly written. World building is almost completely glossed over and history is not used to build the world into in whatever the author may want. Also I am sure the MC is insane.

Great novel so far dthjfgumdtyndtynryumrtumrtumryumrtumdtyjdtyjdtnfgndhjdfgdtyjsrthdhftuj,fgujsrtnetynryumfghndfghdfyndthmdtynsryndtyndfhnyfnfsynddtujsryndty